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Song starts at 1:35 into the video. If you want to skip the back-story footage, you can go right to the start of the song at 1:35.

Dearest fellow Steemian Brothers and Sisters; please do lever up your patience a notch or two, and indulge me if you will, as I musically and metaphorically digress amidst my recent time in caring for (boarding) two rather amazing dogs - in addition to my own, of course.

As such, I suppose this could be considered somewhat of a (half-ass) mini “Steemit Music Video” vs. your typical straight forward openmic entry… But, nonetheless, I hope everyone appreciates it for what it is…

Since I knew we were in for a storm later that evening, and I was aware that the large yellow lab “Sheeba” got quite scared from thunder, I thought it fitting to perform a song I wrote a while back about warning of a storm, and reaching out “Hear, Now, There, & Then,” to be with, care for and comfort all those friends and loved one’s I am most close to.

In this case, though “Sheeba” couldn’t possibly heed my warning about the pending storm, I’m quite certain she got the full benefit of all of us being there to comfort and console her in her time of duress.

I don’t quite know what happened to the sound in the 2nd chorus – it sounds super-flanged out – rather than try to figure it out and fix it, I just decided to leave it as is.

Hope all of you enjoy the journey as much as we did!

   Here, Now, There, and Then

   Here I’ll tell you what I’m seeing’.               
   Now I’ll ask for your ear.
   I see there’s a big storm comin’.                  
   It’s what you gotta hear.

   Here now,- there and then.
   Stand by with me,- friend.

   Now I pledge I’ll be true to you.                        
   And I’ll ask - if you please.
   Can’t you see there’s a big storm comin’?       
   Girl this ain’t no tease. 

   Here now,-there and then.
   Stand by with me,-friend.

   If you could read my mind girl, -           
   I’d know that you’d be mine girl.
   
  When-ever I think of you,                            
  It makes me crazy - tell you what I’ll do.

  If you could see the signs girl,          
  I’d know that you’d be fine girl.
          
  When-ever I think of you,                            
  It makes me crazy - tell you what I’ll do - I'll sing... 

Until next time, to all my fellow Steemian Musicians who labor tirelessly in the name of love for music – thank you for doing what you do! I so appreciate all of your artistic efforts and talent!

And as always, thank you @pfunk & @luzcypher for making this all possible…
PEACE, LOVE, & JUSTICE for ALL…

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Very driving and catchy entry @passion-ground, please check out my Judge Analysis here, I have included you in it.
https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-47-original-blog

Wow, thanks for the mention @verbal-d! I read through your entire rundown for the week along with your picks. I must say that your inclinations run totally in tandem with my own. If I were a judge on last weeks panel, you and I would have been on the same page... Great choices, write ups, and reviews!

Like that guitar riff big time. and...You look like a bad ass in this ;)

Also to note the slow zoom out at the beginning of the tune, I almost cried a bit... ;)

So kind, thank you @jaybird! Nobody rocks-it quite like you my brother!

Hey passion-ground, nice song! But am I right by saying that for having a chance on winning steem prizes from @luzcypher and @pfunk it has to be uncut video?

I'm not quite sure @senzenfrenz - although I myself do not participate in a competitive sense for "the prize money" - I realize and respect that others do, so perhaps one of our gracious hosts might elaborate on that for their clarity.

As an aside @senzenfrenz, the cuts to which I suspect you refer are simply "transition-effects" courtesy of IMovie prior to uploading to YouTube... I hope that helps answer your question to some extent - at least with respect to this particular submission....

You had left such a nice comment on my submission I had to stop by and show some love back. This was a really cool song! And I personally enjoyed the clips in between. I wanted to reach out to Sheeba as well. Very beautiful.

Aww... So sweet of you @the21plus... Thank you!

Every week man! Keeping up the action. Nice work.

Thanks @evoman1... You rock brother! ...I'm with you...

This is a great tune Brother, I could really hear a full production of this one. Love the pre and post pooch vid!

Thank you Bri, glad you also enjoyed my passion for canines! PS. If I had the stems, I'd send them to you for the royal treatment! (he-he)

Thanks for thinking of me Brother 🎶

Good sound,and lyrics.Keep Rockin'

Thank you for that my NY Steam-Rollin' friend!

Lots of passion. That strum for sure emphasizes it. I could picture a big 80s drum beat in the background really kickin' it!

Thank you "T" - I can hear that big 80's drum beat too! Thanks for taking a listen and tossing in your comments - means a lot!

Rock 'n Roll , loved it ... perfect original song ... \m/ , I love acoustic guitar versions .

Thank you David... though it's far from perfect, thanks for taking a listen and leaving such a nice comment!

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