Steemit Open mic - Week #77 (Original song): "Noche Verde".
Saludos y abrazos!
Semana #77! de #openmic: un concurso de celebración musical que auspician los señores @pfunk y @luzcypher.
En esta oportunidad participaré con Noche Verde, otro de mis temas originales. Espero que reciba la misma aprobación que temas anteriores.
Noche verde
Letra:
Es esta noche verde,
Es esta que dijiste:
la de una lágrima inmortal
de azufre sobre el mar.
La misma noche verde,
muerta de ojos tristes.
He recorrido la arena hasta un punto bifocal.
Coro:
Ya que se acabó,
el mar ahora la regresa
y ya terminó,
la sal la descolorea
Diluye mi rostro
que es este que me diste:
el de anémonas de mar que aprenden a cantar
la misma noche verde...
he recorrido esta arena hasta un punto bifocal
Coro:
Ya que se acabó,
el mar ahora la regresa
y ya terminó,
la sal la descolorea
Es esta noche verde.
G.t. (lyric): "Green night".
It's this green night,
Is this what you said:
the one with an immortal tear
of sulfur on the sea.
The same green night,
dead with sad eyes.
I have traveled the sand to a bifocal point.
Since it's over,
the sea now returns
and it's over,
the salt erases its color
Dilute my face
what is this that you gave me:
the sea anemones that learn to sing
the same green night ...
I have traveled this sand to a bifocal point
Since it's over,
the sea now returns
and it's over,
the salt erases its color
Loved this, brother! Awesome composition and performance, man! You are looking good, bro - I hope all is well!
@passion-ground My brother. It fills me with joy to have you in my space. Over there I heard you in a video with your brother. Over here: trying to carry out the plans that you know I have. Circumstances do not always play in favor but, with strength, we look forward. I am in good health and I am working a lot on vocal techniques (you know that this work does not end). I embrace you today and always ... I hope you have a lot of beautiful sunshine!
Thank you, my brother... Wishing all the sunshine upon you as well... Much love...
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Genial.
Saludos, @wilins.
gracias, @sandracabrera hermosa!
Muy buena composición. Te felicito.
Gracias! Un abrazo.
Pero como me gusta a mí esa canción pana mío! <3
gracias, tio querido @leomolina
Buena esa canción, para variar, @wilins. Saludos.
Pendiente con mi voto.
Muchísimas gracias, @josemalavem. Saludos. Te abrazo!