STEEMIT OPENMIC SONGWRITERS CHALLENGE WEEK #1 - THE BROKEN MIRROR
Hello my friends!
On this occasion, I want to entry my first original song to openmic songwriters challenge week 1, sponsored by @meno.
This is my first time making my own song, in the process of making it takes my hard work, spirit, and bedtime. 😑😪
But I am quite proud of my work, because this song is my own that makes it without the help of anyone.💪😀
This song I give the title in accordance with the theme of this week "The Broken Mirror".
This song tells the story of a sadness a man left behind by a woman he loved so much.
Thank you for @luzchyper who have made the post about this challenge, thank you so much!!
Hope you enjoy it guys!
Lyrics :
Verse :
Still remembered by me
About the day
We meet in the garden
And you smile at me
You are like the sun
That brightened my days
But it's only temporary
When you start to change
Bridge :
Has it ever occured to you
About my feeling
You left me
And then let say me something
I'm loving you and still loving you
Reff :
And you leave me alone
Without saying the reason
You broke my heart baby
Like a broken mirror
Now I'm getting crazy
Without you beside me
I beg you my dear
Please come back to me
Pupapma i malaya 91, malaya paleh @wahyunahrul
cool man
Thanks man!
Awesome post friend.
I like your all content because your content type and quality is so good.
best of luck go ahead friend.
great man!
Thank you dude!
Good entry, @wahyunahrul!
Thanks 😊 @passion-ground
Thanks for your entry. Very nice.
Your welcome, thank you 😆
Awesome post friend.
I like your all content because your content type and quality is so good.
best of luck go ahead friend.
Thank you for your comment
I appreciate it
Keep on picking!
I really enjoyed your voice... It has a very Paul McCartney tone to it!!
thank you so much!!
Your voice has a lovely quality to it. I'd love to hear you on a studio recording.
thank you @ausxen
I hope it will be coming soon
😍A very informative post. Great job. Keep it up! 😍
Thanks!