OPENMIC WEEK 23 : Holy Key (cover) by @trillex
Hi guys....this is a little a late
Enjoy!
LYRICS
Intro
Fame and Power...Higher Power, They seem to feed on cowards
Sweet and Sour, Samuel Colt, aint that the firepower
Stir up some controversies and lean with Kendrick's HiiiPoWeR
Cross around my neck, aint no devil now that I cant tower
How far can you go when you dont say the truth
How far can you go 'coz you dont want me through
Block up opportunities, disdain my youth
Throw me different shades of Bad you aim to make me Blue
I put in all my soul, until my craft is good
Proficient and Perfection's all I aim to do
Year 25, my countdown to a better life
Year 23, I almost had an Heart attack
Year 21, the odds that I'd be here were none
Now the OLD girls that I know wont even send me Hi
Society made these nigga so violent
Society always looking me fraudulent
Irrational displacement of this opulence
Society, long lost like the pestilence
They told me read ur books, Oh Yeah , Graduated finally
And Few years later still at home, how's that inspiring?
The Same Society wont even try to hire me
They sold us pipe dreams, and how is that for aspiring?
The Suicidal rate is getting higher, should I cower out
Jealousy and Greed...trait, straight out of the devour's Mouth
Fame and Power...Higher Power, They seem to feed on cowards
Sweet and Sour, Samuel Colt, aint that the firepower
Stir up some controversies and lean with Kendrick's HiiiPoWeR
Cross around my neck, aint no devil now that I cant tower
I am a novice my Steem post ,You didn't notice
I Wrote it all in a manner that seems I need some coaching
Growing up up in that area makes me feel that I am bogus
My lyrical gun approaching, It kills then Imma Poach it
If I see farther than others, I stand on shoulders'o giants
straight flow...touched on a lot of problems in society here. Upvote.
🙏 appreciate @tfeldman
You upped the lyrical bar on this one bro, your writing is sharp top notch in this art piece of flows. The ending could've been a bit smoother, but overall this was a powerful piece and I was zoned in on your words. I definitely agree with the message. No devils can stop us, we overpower them in the name of the Lord Jesus Christ our Saviour. Keep pushing forward bro, and the beat choice was nice, try and project your voice a bit louder, I appreciate you including the lyrics to read along. Definitely a favorite of mine from you. Keep making music, best of luck to your entry bro. Upvoted
Lol! You got me mahn, the ending is very shaky...I was out of words then (rush hour). Jesus Got us! Thanks mahn really appreciate.🙏🙏🙏
You are most welcome bro, we get better with time and more practice so no worries. I still enjoyed your entry no doubt. God/Jesus Christ definitely have us protected and empowered indeed! God bless bro, see you in Open Mic Wk 24
Nice one.
Thanks @luzcypher
Dark & powerful words compadre +1
🙌 thankssss a lot