OPEN MIC WEEK 21 ; The Box by @trillex
Lyrics
I have a feeling I finally found an Occupation
Picking up the microphone, what a Sensation
Young Sensei, the teachers never pay tuition
But this music is my little bit of donation
to this nation and universe filled with damnation
with the windows closed and no sign of exploration
I bow my head to pray 'coz all I want is Salvation
Vacation, My freedom from this Temptation
All I ever I wanted in this life is just to love again
Ever since '09 when my heart got stuck in the Box O' pain
Every obligated lust was rubbing off on me like paint
It Tainted on me like emulsions, something that I couldn't explain
What is loving you?....I don't even love myself enough
And these days we don't wanna Trust
Congratulations ma brother, he got a baby boy
Around the damn same time I lost my baby girl
(Trillex Prodigy)
In the ice box and my heart is cold like a Selachian
A Scorpio, don't tell me that I love you like an Ariel
The Horoscope, flimsy prophecy that's weighting on your brain
The UFO, I felt like I was nothing but an Alien
.....
Yeah, an Alien
I felt nothing like an alien
Presbyterian
The red valerian
The burial
Rest in Peace Grandma
She was an octogenarian!
*Shout out to 'Fisteagnos' for giving me the power
*The Steem Power, upvoting homies to give em the dollar.
All lyrics written by @trillex
Instrumental by M.I Abaga
Fresh flows bro, and I really like your rhyme schemes and patterned interlayers. Definitely not cliche or predictable in any means. I enjoyed this, thanks for sharing and best of luck to your entry. Upvoted
Verbal-d!!! The big man.
Your words mean a lot bro, thanks for upvoting. Off to check yours out
It was well deserved, I'm glad to have up voted you and give you my feedback too. Thanks for checking mine out.
UV+ you have an innovative style compadre
Thanks a lot sir
I'mma listen to this right after I finish preparing and posting my open mic entry. Nice to see you entering again.
Yeah I was going to check on you for that :D
Hope you enjoy the vibes bro, appreciate you checking for my newest entry. I'm always posting music on my page, and it isn't always for the open mic contest either. Thanks again
have to say i love it, just got a bit disappointed with the start, not to say anything, I was just expecting a much deeper and strong voice, but I'm guessing it wouldn't fit that well since it's repeated. So yeah having the exact opposite made me question my sanity :D just jokes no worries :D
Thank you very much. Glad you love it, not everything can be a number 1 hit song lol but the harmonies I created for the recorded version make it hit much harder and i use deeper tones but the main melody was for the chorus which I chose that solo. I will release these tracks when they are ready in the future, thanks again for your feedback and checking it out!