Steemit Open Mic Week 48 - (original song)-"Holes"- @tombalistreri

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

This is an original song I wrote.
I also play the guitars you will hear in the background along with the harmonies.
I've also included the lyrics below the video.
Thanks for listening.
😃

There's a hole in the window.
There's a hole in the floor.
There's a whole lot of folks who aren't whole anymore.
There's a hole in their soul where the pain gets in,
that only the Holy One can fill in.

He's wholey God. He's wholey man.
He's the Holy One know as the great I Am.
He's got a hole in His side.
He's got holes in His hands.
He allowed them there to make us whole again.

There's a whole wide world going into a hole.
There are holes in mens plans of taking more than the whole.
There's a hole in the space were they are trying to take hold.
But there's only one who can make them feel whole.

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I’m a whole lot happier now that you’re back at openmic Tom… Great song, beautiful lyrics, and a testament to your faith, and the faith of millions of others – excellent!

Thanks.
I appreciate that.
It's good to be back.
:)

Thank you!
I do appreciate your comments.

Great voice! Reminds me of a more soprano version of Johnny Cash:)

Thank you!
I never heard the word soprano referred to my voice. (On the other hand I am of Italian decent. lol)
I do like Johnny Cash.
So I take this as a compliment.
:)

👏👏👏 I don't follow the genre particularly, however, it sounded at least as good as any I have heard. One again, @passion-ground has expressed it perfectly (hence my upvote for that as well).

Thank you!
I'm not trying to write for a particular genre.
I just do what I do.
Thus the confusion of anyone who follows me for any one particular thing. lol

Very pretty song. I really love hearing you sing so passionately about your faith. Welcome back man!

Thank you!
Glad to be back and i hope to be listening to everyone's' songs later today. :)

Thoughtfully going deep using word play. Great job.

Thank you.
I try. lol

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