Openmic Week 78 Original Song "Magic Table"
Lyrics:
Seven o'clock at sundown. Thats when I like to eat.
But the lack of a dinner table is making it hard to feed.
The bowls and plates are hot now. And they are scorching my lap and jeans.
So I'll throw my computer away and make better use of this tray.
This tiny table's just what I need.
Great one! I like your guitar part.
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STOPAwesome. You have listened to "They Might Be Giants" a bit no?
I've heard of them, but I'm not really familiar with their work. Thanks though!
Oh man, very similar vibe. Cheeky little dittys, great lyrics, even similar vocal style. I got to see their (probably) final concert last year.
Looking forward to hearing more of your work
Dude you're really talented.
You should write songs just a little longer. These all sound like one verse songs and I suggest you add a few more verses and chorus.
I disagree - once you've said what you have to say, get the hell out of there!