Steemit Open Mic Songwriters Challenge #week 7# - "suci dalam debu"

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

Hello steemian and open mic lovers

today I want to fulfill the challenge of the next openmic

Special thanks to @luzchyper for making this challenge, and thanks to @pfunk who faithfully always supports this openmic.
And thanks also to all the team like @krystle, @verbal-d, @soundlegion, @passion-ground and @jessamynorchard who helped in the success of this open mic stemit.

Lyrics

You are like clear water
In a dusty file
Evident dirt is visible
Clear terlinding also
Love not only in the eyes
Love present in the soul
Let it be wrong in their eyes
Biar Differences visible Between us
I hope you accept
When viewed hina
But the essence of our love
We who feel
Suatu make sure luminous
The door will open
we step together
There we see shine the reality
Debu so gem of contempt so noble
Not a delusion that I give
But the real belief
Because of the love of the sea of ​​the
Would definitely be calm too

Thank you
@taufiqquddin

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NOTE: While we used to allow acapella performances to enter, recently there have been far too many entries of singers without any musicians. Open Mic is a community of musicians and for this reason entries without some musical instrument being performed will not be considered a valid entry. NO KARAOKE

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