Open Mic Songwriter's Challenge Week #3 : The Bonnie Whitetail

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Open Mic Songwriter's Challenge Week #3 : The Bonnie Whitetail

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The theme of the week was 'stolen souls.'
This is a sea shanty from an underworld pirate ship.
It's a song from a ship that sails the ocean of the abyss.
The captain captures lost and hopeless souls in the ocean and puts them to work on the ship.
The song is a work song about the pride and direction that working on the ship has given them.

The souls were all captured, but now serve the ship willingly, as none had purpose or direction when lost in the abyss.

The crew can spot the souls through the darkness by the white tails that they have.
The Whitetail is also the name of the ship.

Full Lyrics:
She's had the helm since time began
We'll throw the whitetail line
The Bonnie Whitetail is her command
We'll throw the whitetail line
We'll serve this ship for a thousand years
that pulled us from the brine
stealing souls from down below
We'll throw the whitetail line

Pulling those out from murk
We'll throw the whitetail line
Brought on deck and put to work
We'll throw the whitetail line
We'll serve this ship for a thousand years
that pulled us from the brine
stealing souls from down below
We'll throw the whitetail line

Her orders are sweet as rum
We'll throw the whitetail line
to the hopeless lost until she come
We'll throw the whitetail line
We'll serve this ship for a thousand years
that pulled us from the brine
stealing souls from down below
We'll throw the whitetail line

Sailing over true abyss
We'll throw the whitetail line
we cast our nets and never miss
We'll throw the whitetail line
We'll serve this ship for a thousand years
until the end of time
stealing souls from down below
We'll throw the whitetail line

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My favorite magical Steemit Troubadour ☺️

Thank you @artedellavita:)
May the wind and fire be merciful...

Grazie amico!

Wow, brother… What an awesome thematic rendition replete with brilliant lyrics and a fantastic storyline! This is a really good entry, man! Nice!

Thanks @passion-ground
I'm glad you like it!
I had to do a sailing shanty at some point:)

Thanks for entering and writing songs for the contest. Very cool

Thanks @luzcypher!
If it weren't for the contest and deadlines, I would have not written anything...
I'm looking forward to the next theme:)

Wow, you are so creative. Great storyline!

Thank you @diabolika. I feel like I should keep working on this song, since it has the deepest story of any of the ones I've written. The captain of the ship doesn't have a name, but in my mind she looks like this...alesha.jpg

Gosh so nostalgic, makes me remember my land destroyer deck. And the 'diabolic tutor'. All gone.

PS I don't know this card but I like this creature as she gets more power or brings the dead back when she attacks.

She's my favorite, and the commander of an edh deck that I use against @kommienezuspadt... that's why he doesn't like her.
She can repeatedly bring back creatures that destroy land when they enter the battlefield! It's very rewarding to leave someone stuck with less than 4 lands:D

Definitely a winner @tarotbyfergus. Genius! You have have really dug deep to write this. I think this is the best song you've ever written/performed.

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