Steemit Open Mic - Week 58: When We Were Young (Original Song)

in #openmic7 years ago

Hey guys, I'm back with another original song for this week's Steemit Open Mic. Congratulations to all the winners and participants last week. This is a song I wrote called When We Were Young. I hope you enjoy it. Lyrics below.


"Let's go to Spain"
were the first words to touch her tongue
as she awoke.
And I don't think
she'd been dreaming of
a get-away for two
by the way she was trying not to smile.

What's gonna happen when
twenty-five years from now,
we're lookin' back and,
we're thinking about
When we were young
And we were fun
But we were so dumb.
We thought we knew everything about
about love
and about pain
and about everything.

"Listen to the rain"
were the last words to leave her lips
as she closed her eyes.
And I don't claim to know her heart
but I think, I really think
it's mine.

What's gonna happen when
twenty-five years from now,
we're lookin' back and,
we're thinking about
When we were young
And we were fun
But we were so dumb.
We thought we knew everything about
about love
and about pain
and about everything.

Well stick and stones
may break my bones some day.
And my words
may hurt you now.
But you gotta know
I never meant it

What's gonna happen when
twenty-five years from now,
we're lookin' back and,
we're thinking about
When we were young
And we were fun
But we were so dumb.
We thought we knew everything about
about love
and about pain
and about everything.


Thanks for listening,
-Charlie

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Beautiful song, great to hear this kind of original music on Steemit!

Can your recommend some other good artists on here?

Thanks a lot man. I'm still fairly new here and haven't made tons of friends yet but if you scroll through the openmic tag there are some really talented musicians on here!

I liked your performance bro. And your song it's beautiful!

😍A very informative post. Great job. Keep it up! 😍
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Great song, Stan! You really captured a pensively retrospective element in weaving your lyrics and feelings throughout the song... cool!

This was a long song and beautiful from start to finish. Great performance and sound balance. You really have something special here and unique. Thanks for putting your heart into it.

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Yes it is a long one. Thanks for listening through, @luzcypher. Appreciate your kind words.

you made my heart skip a beat with this one. making it hard to breathe for this bonnie ;)

Thank you very much as always, @soundlegion!

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