Steemit Open mic week 48 original song by Sean Fisher " Jane's song "

in #openmic7 years ago

Jane's song

There's Jane out on the balcony. Trying to see what she may see... hoping to become aware.
Of all the dangers she could face, standing in a different place.
Someway if she was just out there, she could become anyone...anywhere.

No one stole the greatest moments, but only she could choose the time.
Hope she doesn't get tangled up in the strange ribbons inside.

Sitting underneath the poetry, Jane pondered worth in novelty
Finding the cost unfair, till serendipity became aware of the need to hold her hand
And understand she's not anyone, anywhere.

No one stole the greatest moments, but only she could choose the time.
Hope she doesn't get tangled up in the strange ribbons inside.

Thank you Steemit Open mic
Stay steemy

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SWEET! Sean, you've got that "something special" man - it's truly one in a million bro, - so go with it wherever it takes you... To the moon, the stars, the universe, and beyond... it's all yours for the taking! The world will have no choice but to notice!

Thank you for the encouragement and kind words.
Due to health problems I really have never had a chance to follow the music... to some extent. Hopefully, I can get back to healthy and see where it all goes.
It's always cool to see you at this jam man...
Stay steemy

Crazy as it may sound Sean, you don' necessarily have to be healthy bro - just keep doing what you're doing... But for your own sake, take the best of care of your health that you can! ... and yes, I'm "Steemy" as steemy can be.... as you obviously are as well! Keep On Rockin' It Baby!

really love your voice. this is a great song. very nicely done

Thank you, very much.

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Nice singing, man.

Thank you very much...for everything.

👏👏👏👏 How could anyone not sit up and listen to that? Incredible conviction in your singing mate! Great stuff. You keep on keeping on man!

Thank you kindly. Hope you have a great week. I will do my best to do my best.
Stay steemy.

Cool song. Jane is on the mind of a lot of great song writers. Jane's Song, Sweet Jane, Jane Says, Lady Jane, Baby Jane, Jane, ...

Janie's Got A Gun... Aerosmith... Sorry, just had to throw that in there....

Nice one! Girl's with guns...

Jane is the nickname of the co writer that wasn't able to move across the country when I did.
Stay steemy

Good title!

It reminds me of her.
Hope you are steeming well.

That's why it works so well. Steemy as ever!

Really dig your vocals man

Your songs Rock Sean! You remind me of several great artists,but you are certainly an original! Keep Rockin'

Thank you.
Stay steemy

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