Openmic week 73 original song "Where Is The Wall"

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)

Where is The Wall

Here is a story that I hope you'll listen to.
Every finger's pointing, and mine's pointing too,
But the fingers are just reaching, accusing me and you.

The leaders of our nation, soldiers of the world,
Standing on the battle lines, the flags of war unfurled,
Many mother's babies will die before it ends,
Battle visions bind the minds of all of those who live.

(chorus)
Where is the wall that the handwriting's on?
Do you think that we could read it,
If the writing weren't so small?
Or is the print just much too large
For us to focus on?

24-hour coverage, a madman shot the kids
Thoughts and prayers are offered, the whole country’s feeling it.
Who will stop the carnage, Survivors weep and cry.
We’ve been weighed and found wanting, Stuck in Satan’s lies?
(chorus)
Many mighty nations making more and more warheads,
Military reasoning, more and more prevents,
If they don't we won't, seems to make some sense,
If they do, we do, ain't nobody left!
(chorus)
Do you see that haze floating out there above the ridge
Long ago so natural it danced above the trees.
Coal fires burning so brown it turns the leaves.
Lights on in my house, means lights out for the trees
(chorus)
Rice and beans, beans and rice, makes you feel so good.
Scientists can alter them to taste like actual food.
The plants don’t bear seeds and the bugs won’t eat the leaves
Monsanto stock goes up, but the food can’t meet our needs.
(chorus)
Did you see that plastic Island floating out upon the deep?
It has no pristine mountains, no rivers lakes or trees.
We throw our garbage out, it flows into the sea.
Sea creatures eat it, and then so do we…
(chorus)

I had myself a vision, it was something like a dream.
There was Jesus and this lady, standing there alone,
A crowd of people gathered round them,
Standing there alone...All of them were laughing
And all were throwing stones.
(chorus)

This song idea originated with a story in the book of Daniel in the OT. The king had a dream he did not understand and Daniel explained to him that it meant he had been weighed and found wanting. In other words...he was done for. All of the many verses to this song address issues of our time that could lead to our being done for.

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ooo love this one my friend great song. love your voice and all your lyrics much love to you

This is great info u have there. I learnt so many things in that verse

Yes! Just a guy from the 60s...working toward the present...

Thanks for listening, I know this is a long song, but I felt it was appropriate to the news of the week!

A scholar! I did not study Hebrew, but have been thinking of it. Took a lot of Greek ,but was not very good at it.

Ohhh! This is a beutifull song. Thank you mi dear brother Patrick. Gog bless you very much

Dear me, those lyrics read like a horror story, if only it was just that. On a positive note your creation is spreading information about reality some people might not be aware of. Thank you and God bless.

Thank you Will, I'm always happier if a song bears a message that might encourage action, or at least ask important questions that could leed to thinking and then action. This one with the new verse seemed as though it needed to be put out this week.

Yeah I feel ya man, I've been living in US since May last year and it's been quite an emotional ride in the public sphere. One disaster after another. Has it always been like this?

more and more perverts would work too

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