Steemit OpenMic Week 75 – There Is Love – Original song

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)

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Hey guys! This is my entry for the OpenMic contest, and this week I invite my good friends Paulo Bassman on the acoustic bass, and Bertílio Santos on the vocals, who joined me to play our original song “There Is Love”.
Looking forward for your feedback!

Lyrics
“There is love”

It's been a long road
Since you've went away
Feels like my soul is gone
Living lifeless day by day

I miss the days you used to smile
And look at me with them pretty eyes
Warm my heart with a single touch
Feelings I couldn't get enough of
Talk for hours on the phone
And worry if I felt alone
Today I ain't got none of this because you're gone

Chorus:
But there is love
I miss the smell of you
The things we used to do
But there is love
You're always in my heart
We'll never be apart

I try to keep safe
Try to ease the pain
Dry the tears that fall down
From my face into the ground

I miss the days you used to smile
And look at me with them pretty eyes
Warm my heart with a single touch
Feelings I couldn't get enough of
Talk for hours on the phone
And worry if I felt alone
Today I ain't got none of this because you're gone

Chorus:
But there is love
I miss the smell of you
The things we used to do
But there is love
You're always in my heart
We'll never be apart

Bridge:
Oh oh oh
We'll never be apart
Be apart
We'll never be apart, no
And when the nights get cold
The thought of you
Never leaves me alone
Missing you feels so wrong

Chorus:
But there is love
I miss the smell of you
The things we used to do
But there is love
You're always in my heart
We'll never be apart

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Wow... this is so beautiful. I loved it!

@pedromrmourato Thank you for raising the bar for the OpenMic, combining scenography and crystal clear input sound, I hope many will follow with this example for a more serious and professional approach to entering this ever-growing contest on Steemit, kudos on literally everything 😉

Thanks a lot Ivan! I think this is the way to do it, it's always better for the listener to have a good sound quality and a good mix, the music feels better that way! And I've seen some good sounding entries lately, that's great.

I completely agree @pedromrmourato it is the direction open mic has to go

This is incredible guys!! Just awesome! Congratulations on winning last week's open mic, you absolutely deserved it!! :)

truly amazing guys I loved it!

Hi @soundlegion! So great to hear from you! Thanks a lot

Absolutely fabulous performance guys! Beautiful, soulful song, polished and energetic. Loved it!

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Hey @luzcypher, thank you so much for those words! I was curious to see the reaction to this song, had never posted an original song on the OpenMic, and so far i couldn't be happier!
Also thanks a lot for the resteem, I'm grateful for your support.

Very Cool Buddy!

Sent it to my buddy at Coachella!

hey @inventrix, thanks a lot for that! Hope to hear from you!

Pardon my language, but holy shit!

I'm assuming you liked it, so, Amen!!
Also, congratulations on your last week's song!

And thanks a lot for the resteem!

You're welcome. And yes, I loved it. I'm super picky about things I resteem. I will be shocked if you don't win at LEAST top 5 this week from every single judge. Just wow.

Your words make me really happy! That's a great thing about the OpenMic, You get to share your music with other musicians, and it's great when we get this kind of feedback! Thank you

Another great performance! The guitar and bass are tight and those smooth, crisp vocal tones just glide gracefully across the top beautifully! Capped off by a great performance!
Well done!
🙏🏽🌟

@nathankaye, The Great!! Thanks a lot for your support. I'm a big fan of your vibe! Keep on rocking!

Thanks so much for saying that, bro!
🙏🏽🎼🎶

Hope You comeback strong this week! 💪💪

Thanks bro!
Yes! Besides having a busy week, it was good to give it space from submitting for a week and just enjoy the music and support the good entries, like yours.
But I'll be back in it this week, for sure!
Keep sharing your awesome talent, my friend.
🙏🏽

Holy crap this blew me away! VERY well done. You sing flawlessly, great control of your vibrato and SO. MUCH. SOUL.

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey @slacktmusic, thanks a lot! Keep on following, more song to come!

Wow, this is insanely awesome!!!! I really don’t even have the words to describe how it makes me feel. I have chills right now. Outstanding work guys!

Hey @melodyrussel, thanks a lot! I think what you describe is what every muscian aims for when composing a song... so glad we made you feel that way!

Wow. Now your voice is an highlight itself but also the song blew me away. So soulful and heartfelt. Amazing performance from all of you!

Thanks @melavie, so glad you enjoyed it! More songs to come, keep in tune!

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