Steemit Open Mic Week #75 - Sendas del Pasado (Pechiche Mena) -Original Song.
Hello Steemit!
This is my entry for Week 75 , I decided to pressure myself into 'finishing' a song for the Open Mic , as I did in the Songwriter's challenge days. When that contest ended I got a little ''lazy'' about writing songs ( I am still writing btw! .. just not that frequently) so with a little pressure I got this little song out called ''Sendas del Pasado'' (''Roads from the past'').
It's still in the works but I liked it so I decided to give it a go .. it's HOT as hell today as you can see me all sweaty (lol!) .. and also the guitar microphone died on me while performing , so I took it out and with some EQ and compression I could manage to ''mix it in'' a little better from the vocal mic , so it's a little low in volume... sorry!
(P.Mena)
Un corazón cansado
Tiempo que se invierte
Disuelve mi présente
Se pierde , Se esconde
Un dia mas.
Almas que se unen
Que viajan en un túnel
Velos que se mueven
Despiden al que quieren
Se pierde, Se esconde
Un dia mas.
La senda
del que vino ayer
Las horas
la forman
Y lo vuelvo a ver
Deja tu ser
Lava tu piel
Al saber que
Juntos venimos
Y nos iremos también.
Here's a translation:
Roads from the past
(P.Mena)
Roads from the past
a tired heart
Time that reverts
Dissolves my present
It gets lost and hides
one more day
Souls that unite
travel in a tunnel
veils that move
they say goodbye to the loved ones
They get lost and hide
one more day
The trail
of the one who came yesterday
The hours form it
and I see him again.
Leave your self
Wash your skin
By knowing
We all came together
and we will leave together too.
Once again, a big thanks for @luzcypher and @pfunk for setting this space for us here , it's always my pleasure to play for you!
Thanks for reading and listening!
I love your style! keep up the originals
Thank you very much @badcamper ! I'll certainly try ! :) Cheers!
Very lovely singing and playing @pechichemena. Great intimate song. Very well done!
Thank you very much bro :) , I'm glad you liked it ! The song is still in the works but this feedback makes me want to go back and work it some more ! :D
Hermoso tema, me encantó.
muchas gracias ! :) un gran abrazo !
very nice song!
thank you :) !
So beautiful. I love your songwriting Pechiche.
"Leave your self
Wash your skin
By knowing
We all came together
and we will leave together too."
oooh , thank you very much @bennettitalia ! means so much when someone takes a little extra attention to the lyrics :D . I appreciate it my friend! Cheers!
Awesome performance brother.
Thank you very much @luzcypher brother ! :D
YES! As I opened your video and began listening to the guitar intro, I was shouting out loud... "DO IT," "DO IT," "DO IT," Pechice... Get back to your roots and deliver the goods that only you can! I was SO HAPPY when your vocals came in, bro! YOU DID IT... Just like I hoped you would!
haha @passion-ground brother , your comments always bring a smile to my face! I hope one day we can share a beer ! It would be a blast ! Thank you so much for your encouraging words ! A big hug my brother!
Eeeeeeeeeeesa!!!!!
Esa letraa, no la tenía!!! :) Nice pech!
hola carlukita ! gracias ! .. si la letra es nueva ! hahaha .. este tema venia dando vueltas hace un tiempo y decidi ''hacerlo nacer'' :) .
Guao hermano!!! Me dejo sin palabras. Me encanto su voz, y escucharla bien temprano con el café en la mano no tiene precio. En verdad lo felicito hombre... \m/
Muchisimas gracias @edwardstobia por tus palabras ! me pone contento haber alegrado un poco tu cafe :) ! Un gran abrazo !
@pechichemena ... Your voice is so serene.. it's like how windchimes make me feel so at ease and relaxed and peaceful. And same with your guitar.. I wish I could play like that. You have such a special gift. ♥
awww @paintingangels , you are so sweet ! You are as lovely as this comment and your voice is very hypnotic and soothing , you have a gift :) .
♥♥♥