STEEMIT OPEN MIC WEEK 75 - "Staircase" Original Song by @paintingangels

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

Hi all. I can't get into a habit of calling you guys "Steemians"... To me that sounds like a bunch of aliens camped out in a hot tub or something. So hello, friends. Future homies. Sorry this video is a little bit pixely. My webcam is being a jerk.

This is a song I wrote called, "Staircase." I'm sitting on an exercise ball in case you wonder why I'm so bouncy. I replaced my chair with it. Healthier sitting is a thing. I don't want to go on and on about how this song is special to me and it means a lot. I don't really have a lot to say about it. It was featured in a movie. I guess that's a little tidbit of info. ("Revelation Road") This song has D-minor in it, which really screws me up sometimes. I screwed up a few times here but I'm tired of recording it. I had a good video of it but I forgot to say @paintingangels in the beginning and I would prefer to follow the rules. So, yeah. The screw up parts are here to stay. I thank you for listening anyway. Have a great week. ♥ Also, thank you to everyone who is involved with the open mic. You're all fantastic human beings and it's been a pleasure getting to know some of you a little better. Always feel free to say hi. I'm on discord but I don't really understand it much.

Here are the lyrics, also with the guitar chords because people ask me a lot.
(I have capo on 3rd)

Staircase

Am, C, G
If you tell me I should go tonight
Am, C, G
then I'll do my best to leave,
Am, C, G
but as fate has so decided now, I simply cannot find the way.
Am, C, G
Am I doomed to travel endless roads
Am, C, G
and spend my days and nights with broken things?
Am, C, G
I wish that I could kiss your pain away.
Am, C, G
I still feel that we were meant to be.
Dm, C, G
Now I stare beyond that broken door.
Dm, C, G
How I wish that I could stay.
Dm, C, G
If we spin around in circles
Dm, C, G, (Am)
can't we somehow float away.
Am, C, G
I think I'll cut down that old willow tree.
Am, C, G
Do you remember that old tree?
Am, C, G
I will break it into pieces, babe..
Am, C, G
I will set these demons free.
Dm, C, G
And I will wrestle with the Thunder Gods..
Dm, C, G
I will claim our piece of sky.
Dm, C, G
I'll build a staircase to the clouds, so high..
Dm, C, G, Am
We can finally close our eyes.
Dm, C, G
I wish that I could kiss your pain away.
Dm, C, G
I still feel that we were meant to be..
Dm, C, G
now I stare beyond that broken door,
Dm, C, G, Am
and how I wish that I could stay.
Am, C, G
If you tell me I should go tonight,
Am, C, G, Am
I will do my best to leave.

Thank you @luzcypher and @pfunk for hosting the open mic, and to all the lovely judges as well.


Many years ago, right after I wrote it I made a little video for this song. It's kind of silly (I thought it was pretty artsy at the time) but I thought I might share it, too. Not as anything to do with the contest, but just in case you'd rather hear a better version of it than me sitting on a bouncy ball singing into a cheap webcam.

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I love sad songs. love your explanation if im happy i just go do happy things so there is no need to write, so feel that, beautiful work hun i love the way you play and your voice. lovely song yet again

You are amazing. You have such a special and wonderful voice! You are very beautiful and have a very nice creative side. I would just loooove to see you more confident in what you do! You are sooo talented! Believe in yourself. Thank you so much for sharing. You gave me the shivers!! :D

Thank you so much.... just so kind. I am trying to be more confident for sure. I feel so awkward and exposed when I am filming myself. There's a part here where my voice is shaking a lot because I'm so nervous. One reason I am actually sharing these videos is to help overcome my stage fright. It's beginning to help. I film a lot that I delete, just to practice. Thank you for your comment though. I've been thinking about it a lot. I want to be like a tiger like beyonce says. Roar.. lol. Actually, I don't know who sings that roar song. Ha. I like it though. Have a great week!

Nice, you are doing amazing! Filming is an excellent way of growing. Brave of you since you have the stage fright, I am sure you will come out of that soon though. I think many of us are struggling to be more confident, but as long as we are aware of it and want to change- we will, sooner or later. Anyone can be anything they want.

haha what if you make your own cover of that Roar song and use it as a tool to become more confident. Go crazy, silly and film it! :P And then you post it to me hihi... no, keep it to yourself and see yourself thrive! :) Congratulations to the prize this week! And best of luck with everything in the future <3 I will be checking in from time to time to see your art.

Thank you, have a great week you too !
All the best

Beautiful Serena, hauntingly fragile and melancholic, and the video is simple but evocative. ❤️🎼

This is just spot on description @yidneth... Plus she's got an evasive sense of humour.

Aww, Priscilla, thank you very much. That means so much, coming from you. I'm hoping you will enter this week. ♥

Beautifully haunting song... Sigh... Hits the emotion button...

And I know what you mean about Discord!!! It's taken me ages to understand it and I'm really good with tech...

Bless ya!
🙏🏽

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Congratulations for winning week 74.

@luzcypher Thank you so much! Really can't believe it. ❤️

I like your words, your tunes, and your voice. This makes me emotional.

Thanks, Daniel. I appreciate that a lot. ♥

This was beautiful! really enjoy your vocal style.. it reminds me a bit of Stevie Nicks...

Thank you so much! I love Stevie Nicks.. I could never live up to that, but I adore the compliment.

Lovely song Serena. You sing from the heart, and thats an ability not everybody has. Thank you for sharing ❤️

@solburgos Thank you. ♥ I've never understood how anyone could not sing from the heart, because what is music without heart? But it does happen.. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. Means alot.
Have a beautiful day. ♥

I bet you know some happy chords.

Maybe a few... lol

Yet another beautiful song, you keep the quality up there <3

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