Steemit Open Mic Week 60 - Original: Noria - Mother
Hello guys,
My entry for this week's open mic(60) is an original old song I wrote, called Mother.
I feel so sad today, having such heaviness in my heart, as my best friend's mother has passed away.
I dedicate this one to him, with much love.
For the memory of his mother.
The song was written many years ago, after my mother wrote me a letter, when I was feeling lost.
She wrote me that I shouldn't force my eyes to see, and that I should let go of some things in my life, so I can see them more clearly. And not to be afraid to follow my heart.
The song was originally arranged and performed together with my band Noria.
Thank you for listening.
Yours,
Nir
Mother/
Mother, I am in the path
and the words are here, around me
And they guide me, when I'm lost
and I'm touching, but they don't
And I try to understand-
Will they ever reach me?
'cause I cannot
oh...
You shouldn't force your eyes to see,
it's clear
You ran so deep for one big will
and now it's real
Follow where they take
you shouldn't be afraid
Just follow where they lead
In the beautiful green spring
oh...
Mother, I am in the path
and the words are here, around me
And they guide me, when I'm lost
I remember all the thing I've lost
I shouldn't force my eyes to see,
it's clear
I souldn't force my eyes to see
the beautiful green spring
oh..
What a beautiful and touching dedication spawning from the love from your own mother, and performed in honor of your best friend's mother whom he recently lost... Quite lovely, @nirtsfaty.
Thank you for this sensitive comment, dear friend. I appreciate it...
wow that was so felt. really great work my friend love your original material
Thank you so much, Bonnie!
Have a nice week
Love this! your recording looks and sounds great. Just out of curiosity, are you using a GoPro?
Thank you! It's made with a Zoom q something, can't remember the specific model
you are incredible! loved it! <3 i am so sorry for your loss <3 it is the worst pain.. i just recently lost my grandpa .. who was more like a father to me... it is terrible . but here we are... our mission is to make songs about it all to heal.. right? Thanks for sharing! <3 upvoted you! <3big hug for you and your friend!
Thank you. You're right, it is the worst pain..I'm sorry for your loss as well
thank you. <3
You have something special in your performance. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you...
Thank you dear friend!
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