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RE: Open Mic Week 28 -- "Angel in Disguise" Original Song performed by @BassBoatRadio
How many songs do you have like that? You're writing some great stuff there @bassboatradio and I appreciate you sharing them with us on Open Mic.
Great delivery and heartfelt. I think it could use a short 2-3 line bridge after the second verse, then back to the chorus, as opposed to a third verse. The song is so to the point and aimed right at the heart that it doesn't need much more. Just my thoughts. Love your contribution here and keep 'em comin' Thanks.
Thx man, solid suggestion. Hmm....
I've got a few hundred songs man -- some are better than others, and some are just really bad and ridiculous.. Took about 10-12 years off, so just now having fun unpacking & working some of them up. Pine Trees and this song are new.
Appreciate the encouragement, homie & thanks for hosting this