Steemit Openmic Week 61 - Original Song "Broken Mirrors"
Hey Ya'll,
This is an original Tune for Openmic 61 as well as for the brand new Songwriter's Challenge Week 1. It's a duel entry!
Not my greatest performance IMO, multitasking a bit too much here reading the lyrics and trying to remeber the bullshit extra chords I decided to throw in lol.
ENjoY!
BROKEN MIRRORS
V: You’re two faced so hard to read
Keep saying things I want you to mean
Between each word is just empty
You hide it well what you are really
P: I watch your eyes when you move your mouth
I see inside no sense of self
You make believe and I can deceive
And when I stare you’re staring back at me
C: We’re just like broken mirrors x4
V: This time focus on me
Wrote down the things I want you to read
Between each word there’s no meaning
I hid it well what we meant really
so rockin!
Nice one @jaybird. Thanks for entering.
Please add the lyrics to your post. Thanks
tough to understand what I'm mumbling lol...?
Never mind. It's the rules on the OpenMic Songwriters challenge, not here at Open Mic.
haha, I thought as much. I actually meant to put them in anyways, so thanks for the reminder!
It's a bit confusing at first going between the two entries lol
Great song and performance. Very catchy!
Glad to hear it, thx !
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Thx yo !
you rock the steemit sir!!
Hah thx !
You make everything sound good bro
Thanks Brotha, I'm enjoying this songwriting comp, pushing me to write on a deadline !
You're welcome as always bro, it ain't no thang but a chicken wang with a guitar twang Mayne lol
very cool and catchy song my friend! I enjoyed it ! cheers!
Thanks! You've got some good stuff yourelf from what i've seen.