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RE: OpenMic Songwriter's Challenge Week 7 entry - Right Place, Right Time
You're right this week was a struggle! But you did great! I like how you alternate in your lyrics between those short lines and the longer more explanatory lines. Interesting and very creative. Now off to the last week!
Thanks, Geena! I've been trying to figure out how to say more with less words in my poetry. Those short line verses were an exercise in this; I really like the way they came out. You probably noticed, but I'm normally pretty wordy. ;)
For a few days I thought I wouldn't get anything in this week, which would've been a serious disappointment. I slept great last night after getting this posted.
Let's bring it home! :)