Steemit Open Mic Week 45 - All Along The Waterline - Original SongsteemCreated with Sketch.

in #openmic • 7 years ago

Here is my first entry for a Steemit open mic - week 45. It's called All Along the Waterline. I hope I've followed all the rules correctly! :-)

The lyrics are as follows:

All Along The Waterline

by Tim Wakefield

There will be dancing and singing and happy times…
All along the waterline.

There will be kissing and cuddling and feeling fine…
All along the waterline.

There will be memories, oh yes indeed!
There will be drinking of wine…..
All along the waterline.

You know I love you and think about you all the time…
All along the borderline.

You know I hope and I pray that one day you’ll be mine….
All along the borderline.

We will make memories oh yes indeed,
We will make reasons and rhymes,
All along the waterline.

Please…. Won’t you give me a sign?
Please… I feel like I’m losing my mind…

(Special extra chorus)
All along the waterline…
All along the borderline.
All along the waterline.
All along the borderline.

Repeat verse 1 and then onto the special extra chorus bit again.

#originalmusic #poetry #writing #sheffield
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     7 years ago 

    Big upvote! great work and energy.

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     7 years ago 

    Thanks! I enjoyed myself! :-)

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     7 years ago 

    That's really nice, playing and singing, and aswell the songwriting!
    I like bottlenecks! Upvoted and following!

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     7 years ago 

    I also love bottlenecks. Thanks! Check these guys!

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     7 years ago (edited)

    Thanks for that nice link of music, pleasure to listen to it!! Know this one?

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     7 years ago 

    This is just awesome. Coincidentally, George Harrison played with Delaney and Bonnie around the time of the filming of the video I posted. Here's some footage of their live electric show:

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     7 years ago 

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     7 years ago 

    nice work, love your enregy

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       7 years ago 

      Thanks! I love the sound of that SG and the slide! :-)

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       7 years ago 

      good stuff !!!!

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         7 years ago 

        Thanks! Steemit is the best thing ever. :-)

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           7 years ago 

          This post has received a 1.34 % upvote from @bellyrub thanks to: @johleen.

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             7 years ago (edited)

            Good vibes man, I dig the feel... gave ya a follow

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               7 years ago 

              Thank you! I'm all about the feel personally. :-)

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                 7 years ago 

                Great song my friend! I just found your post.This song has hit potential.Keep them coming.I don't know how to get eyes on mine...just .54 cents.Maybe next week. Full Steem A head!

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                   7 years ago 

                  Thanks a lot! Yeah I was wondering how to get eyes on mine too and then this post got some eyes on it and I don't know exaclty how. Have you tried @randowhale?

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                     7 years ago 

                    Oh man! this is such a good feel song...a definate vote from me...you should post lessons as well

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                       7 years ago 

                      Thanks! There has been a very encouraging response to this song! As for lessons, is there something specific you are interested in hearing about?

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