Steemit Open Mic Semana 110 Se soltó el demonio en casa (Original Song)

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)


"Se soltó el demonio en casa"

Obra Original

Vamos a aclarar algo primero, ¿ok? "Se soltó el demonio en casa" no es nada satánico jajaja así que deja de decir "bicho sape..."; este tema se refiere a una vida de pareja unida por muchos o pocos lazos que no tienen absolutamente nada que ver con el amor, ¿Se entiende? Es decir, cuando dos personas deciden compartir espacio y tiempo pero por interés, conveniencia, conformidad, miedo a la soledad, culpa, atracción netamente física o porque "se sienten amarrados" por un hijo en común. Cuando sucede esto, es normal que hayan muchos problemas en cuanto a comunicación, interacción, vida sexual y respeto entre estos individuos, lo que lleva frecuentemente a que se ataquen, se agredan, se hieran, "Se suelten sus demonios" (por hacer referencia a todos esos sentimientos y pensamientos malos que conllevan a hacer los actos dolorosos, desde malas palabras, comentarios hirientes e insultos hasta cachetadas y sartenazos).

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Se soltó el demonio en casa (The demon was released at home)

Lyrics in English

I
The demon was released at home in front of the television, that's normal,
Just at noon watching "the informant", the husband came to lunch,
She asks about the meeting, whether it was good or not, He does not want to answer.
He was supposed to be promoted that day, not that he was going to be expelled;

II
The demon was released in his house when he found out, they knew it was the end,
She told him dirty things, he was not left behind, they were "David and Goliath",
Actually, it was three years that both were, years of unhappiness,
But the moral of this love story is what's important, you'll see:

Chorus
Everything that joins without feeling love will end badly,
If there is interest in the middle and they do not feel love, they will never have peace,
// And if the demons are released in the house uy, it will end badly //

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Antes de terminar te dejo también el vídeo subido en youtube:

Es muy grato compartir mi música con todos ustedes, y recuerda: "Todo lo que se une sin sentir amor terminará muy mal, si hay interés por medio y no sienten amor pues nunca tendrán paz, e imagínate, si se sueltan los demonios en la casa..."

Buenas vibras para todos, pórtense bien y quierance vale :)




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Gracias muchas por su apoyo! siempre es y será un honor ser tomado en cuenta por su equipo, de verdad verdadera :)

Some beautiful vibes in this song! I love your voice, you are very talented. Keep it up!

Hello! really thank you for your nice comment and clear for the support, it is a pleasure for me to receive your good vibes :)

Desconozco si te pasó a ti, y en caso de que si pues que chimbo, pero aun así le sacaste provecho y creaste algo genial. Si le pasó a un conocido, bueno al menos tienes la canción para compartirla con el jajajajaja

Me gustó tu voz, y el ritmo de la canción!
Saludos

jajajaja sabes qué? me ahorraré la explicación del desenlace de la historia, porque me da risa cuando como tú se acercan a preguntar si me pasó o "cómo lo llevo" jajaja es agradable, de todos modos gracias, por tu comentario y tus cumplidos hermano, saludos cuídate mucho.

Esta canción está genial y @curie lo sabe jajajajaja! ¡Feliz por tí!

Mi bondadosa y tolerante amiga Euu... jajajaj graciaaas, viste? yo tambien estoy feliz por ti ya te visite ;)

Thanks so much for sharing! This is the second compliment I've give on how the video was put together. I enjoy seeing you do both tracks even if they are separately. I like seeing that process.

You have a great voice and fantastic talent on the guitar! I love the chorus.

Everything that joins without feeling love will end badly,
If there is interest in the middle and they do not feel love, they will never have peace,
// And if the demons are released in the house uy, it will end badly //

It's so true! And a lot of times people fall in love for the wrong reasons and it ends SO badly. I've experienced it and it's kind of the worst thing ever hahaha

Thanks for sharing! Keep going on this open mic thing, man! You really do have a great voice. Cheers!

hahaha God, it happened to you. When the appropriate reasons are not the ones that join the couple the chances of ending badly are as high as the eiffel tower, but I will not keep saying it because I already know that you understand me very well @jocqua hahaha

You have rejoiced me a lot with your comment, your compliments are music for my ears brother, really thank you, a hug!

Hahahaha it's ok man! Enough time has passed that I can also laugh about it LOL Definitely couldn't have laughed about it at the time but it's funny to look back at it now. That Eiffel tower teetered for a while before falling over
🤣🤣🤣

Your guitar and voice was music to mine! Keep playing man. Hugs all around!

hahaha well, we learn from the mistakes we make (although sometimes we are very stubborn and repeat the error). Thanks again, my brother, take care of yourself, Joshua, or jocqua :)

Hahaha yes we do sometimes repeat those mistakes. But I like to think we get better at detecting them in the future ;-) Take care as well, Elison!

I hope so, brother, I hope so! Hahaha

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What a catchy song! Is it your original song? I really love it! Your performance is great! Singing, talking, pointing with your finger and even dancing :)

I can see that you have enjoyed it a lot. It's a song that makes me want to dance. The lyrics are kind of bittersweet and before I read them I thought it was a very cheerful song :)

You have a great voice and you sound very confident. You are of course a great guitar player too. I assume that you have firstly recorded the music and then you did the singing, right? I'm just asking because I see your phone in front of you :)

Thank you for sharing! It was great to see you performing :)

Hey! What a beautiful comment I have found here today ... how beautiful, thank you! You really took into account every detail. That thing you heard was written by me, yes, I'm glad that you wanted to shake your hip a bit and move your neck up and down along with the rhythm :)

bittersweet ... I like the way you refer to the composition, I accept ... hahaha thank you for every compliment, and yes, I recorded the guitar first, then the main voice, then some second voices, that's why that phone was always in the middle , he is my microphone hahaha thank you for dedicating your lines.

Thank you for getting back to me. It looks like making a song is a lot of work. And you did it very well :) I'm looking forward to hear more from you :)

Oh yeah, I will do everything I can to hear more of me, young and beautiful lady :)

Sweet boy! ;)

Buenísima hermano!!! Siempre impresionando :D

Edward, acabo de dejarte un comentario en tu post, yo soy muy distraído de verdad que si lo admito, pero cuando conozco personas como tú le pongo un poco de empeño, es que me gusta tu forma de componer de verdad que si, te ganaste un seguidor más. Ah y gracias por tu comentario hermano :)

Anyone who is not familiar with this type of music would believe that it is something satanic hahaha, very good song and interpretation, congratulations for the votes received. Good luck with music

hahaha ajam! you were one of those who said "bicho sape ..." hahaha thank you for the good wishes, which I like to read you :)

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