My First Steemit Open Mic Week 90, Yeah!!! "Smoke" (Original)
Hey Dtube and Steemit Fam!!
Excited to be posting my first open mic vid today! There's so much incredible talent and so many f%*$ing cool peeps in this community and I knew from the jump I wanted to be a part of it! If you happen upon this vid, thanks so much for watching!
This particular jam is about a failing relationship- a sad and chaotic time in my life. It's crazy how you can go from loving someone so deeply to arriving in a place in a relationship where you actually want to hurt that person. It's crazy how much pain words can cause. I think the lyrics pretty much sum it up.
~Smoke~
You and I we stare across a hazy battlefield of grey
As words continue to rise in the air of things
That we never believed we’d ever speak
And then they fall, cutting through the flesh and bone and straight to soul
And all the secret places only we would know
Nothing hurts quite like wounds from your love
You can’t see that there’s smoke in the kitchen
There smoke in the kitchen
There a fire thats been a burning
But you can’t see that there’s smoke in the kitchen
We look away, unable any further to view the pain
And darkness brought on by our own youthful mistakes
Hindsight 20/20 looking back
Or is it too late? We’re both running on fumes that could set us a blaze
And burn this house down to the ground and seal us in graves
Dusted in the ashes of our love
But you can’t see that there’s smoke in the kitchen
There smoke in the kitchen
There a fire thats been a burning
But you can’t see that there’s smoke in the kitchen
You can’t see it I can’t believe it
Were going down in flames
Oh here we go
You can’t see it I can’t believe it
Were going down in flames
Oh here we go
▶️ DTube
▶️ IPFS
This is really fantastic :) Keep it up!
Thanks so much!!!
Love it! Thanks for sharing your heartsong here. ;)
Thank you @katrina-ariel!!
Knockin em out the park! I like how you get a lil raspy on this one. You sing with great emotion. Keep it up :)
Aww shanks :D <3
keep it up \m/
Thanks!!
I was so busy last week, but I finally wrote a review to your entry. Please feel free to check it out @elainfaye for Open Mic Week 90, I really enjoyed your original song
Thanks for your patience and understanding
https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/steemit-s-official-open-mic-judge-verbal-d-s-top-5-entries-for-week-90-original-blog
Sweetness!! Thanks so much @verbal-d!!
I'm so happy that you placed in Open Mic this week.
Click here to see who won Open Mic this week:
Steemit Open Mic Week 90 Winners See Who Won Open Mic And Join Us This Week --- by @luzcypher
Duuuuuude!!!!! Thats awesome!!!! Thank you so much!!! Heading over to check out the winners now!!! Thanks again!
WHOOOO! SUPER FAN AGAIN!
Whoot!!! Thanks love!!! <3
So nice. Your voice is superinteresting. I am following, lady. You are so cool. Greetings.
Thanks love! You are super talented also! I actually started following you a few days ago. Thanks so much for the friendship and so nice to meet you!!
Really? That's awesome. Thank you so much. Yes, right? It is so nice meeting people like us hahaha Nite, lady.
<3
What a great first entry @elainefaye, you are making my judging easy this week, and I thank you for the original music too, this one has some deep soulful tones to it, keep bringing that passion forward, and welcome to our open mic community.
Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and the warm welcome!!
Thank you so much for
Taking the time to listen
And the warm welcome!!
- elainefaye
I'm a bot. I detect haiku.
Awesome!!!!
I love the song!!❤
Thanks so much friend!!
De nada amiga sigue cantando porfavor