Steemit Open Mic Week 44 - Lonely Room (Original Song) by @davidfar (Davood Faramarzi) 🎸
Hi Steemians,
This is my Original Song for Openmic week 44 , song called "Lonely Room" It's in Farsi Language. hope you like it.
I wrote this song about 5 years ago when I was a student in university. and I had some lonely times in my room and I started playing this rhythm and suddenly I started to write this song , I try to translate it for you , my friends.
Lyrics :
I need sleep , bring the day
Tired of the nights , bring the light
I am far from my Instruments , o Moon you sing.
everybody's gone , I am alone , at least you stay !
My Lonely room , days and nights
lonely brain and my shadow you stay !
Lonely Room , An Empty Dream
Scream and no sound , God! You stay !
But in Farsi I wrote it with better words , which I couldn't find the equal words in English for translate , so it wasn't this much easy. :)
sorry for the blur Camera , It's doing it automatically. also I couldn't record it for second time , so I did only one record. and no practice on it.
Sincerely ,
Davood Faramarzi
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Goodluck
Thank you so much for listening my friend :)
I felt a lot of emotions listening to this song. Beautiful singing voice, upbeat guitar, passionate lyrics...Well done! Thank you so much for sharing!
Thank you so much , it's your kindness , I am glad that you enjoyed listening to it. :)
Ooh yes, it's so refreshing to hear different languages in music. I really enjoy.
Thanks for playing Steemit Open Mic.
Thanks for supporting musicians and singers in steemit ;)
Good song mate keep on sharing on here.
I also enjoyed the international communication "issue" between you and @juliakponsford earlier on!
Thank you so much , it was my fault and too when you read it , you will see the last sentence came in a wrong place , I mean when she said about her article and then she said your work is undervalued and then she wrote it's 10 days old. this is why I got confused and I thought wrong .LOL
upped followed and resteemed. Great vocals great playing and thank you for the translation of the lyrics.
Followed you bro thank you for supporting my work , it's your kindness my friend , thank you so much :)
Very nice man!
thank you so much :)
Loved it like always! :D
thank you so much my friend :)
Farsi is a very mellow language and sounds very good to the ears. You sing with feeling. Nice work. Keep the music alive.
Peace and love !!!
thank you so much @atulmittal , it's your kindness :) , I am glad that you liked my work. I still try to do more better works.
Hi David nice post best of luck! Have you considered joining minnowsupport? It can help you network and get followers! I have written an intro article on my page on how to join, I think your work is undervalued :) (the post is about ten days old and has a picture of some orange fish)
@juliakponsford Hi and nice to meet you , why you say this ? I record it today , I haven't post this in any other place , why you say it's undervalue ? I did this for openmic week 44. did you even listened to my song ?
I think you misunderstood, undervalued means I think you should be making more money on your songs. Sorry for the confusion! Yes I did listen 🙂
Thanks @juliakponsford for listening my friend , :) I already was in minnowsupport and they commented up there , yes but I am sure that Luzcypher and some others who like it and if they enjoyed listening to my song will upvote it , but my work won't finish I continue to do more and more . and also I think in this hour some people are slept . sorry if I misunderstood you , I thought you mean my post is about 10 days old , LOL
No I didn't think it was old, lol something got lost in translation I think. Your song is lovely! (my article about joining minnowsupport is 10 days old)
LOL , wish you the bests my friend . thanks for your kindness :) glad to meet you again.