Steemit Openmic Week 86 Claraty Untitled New Original Song

in openmic •  last year  (edited)

Hi Steemians!! It has been awhile. I have a new song brewing and you're my favorite people to share with in the raw stage. Will you help me find a song title again? :) xoxo

-Claraty

Lyrics:

Now everywhere I go these days
There's someone yelling words of hate
And everywhere I try to stay
Has me feelin like I gotta get away

Such beauty in the world around
Why do we flip it upside down?
We're acting like a pack of clowns
With our heads hanging low

I used to miss my home in the stars
Can't get there by a boat or a car
Been playing hide and seek with my wings
And they haven't flown in awhile

Child, don't you cry I will hold your head at night
I will hold you head at night
Ooh, if you cry I will hold your head at night
I will hold you head at night

The simplest things are usually true
And take the most courage to see
Nod along and act like a fool
And you'll be just like me

I'm stubborn as a goat at a gate
Sometimes I forget what's at stake
Ego plays some funny games
and I play them too

Will you tell me your tale too?
I wonder if I'll find me in you
We'll fall in love and see new truths
As one

We can't be all that different
I'm feelin I could be your friend
I'll be someone to depend
on

Child, don't you cry I will hold your head at night
I will hold you head at night
Ooh, if you cry I will hold your head at night
I will hold you head at night

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Welcome back. Missed you.

awwe thanks, good to be back!

Lovely composition and performance! Nice! How about "Child, Don't You Cry" for a title???

Thank you dear!!

I really like the mood of this tune, very mellow. I also like your voice quality. it seems like you really go for honesty, like displaying your own sound with no pretenses and i dig that. great song. maybe "simplest things"...

I appreciate your feedback :) Thanks for the love! Maybe "simplicity" ?

Probably the simpler the better :)

This is awesome! Hope you don't mind, but I'm "stealing" it for the musical interlude in my Tarot Tuesday post I'm doing for tomorrow.

As for a title, I see the first two that popped in my brain have already been suggested - LOL! My third choice would be, "Child."

haha awesome! "steal" away, I'm honored!! Mm, I kind of like the simplicity of just "Child" too. Thanks!

Coolness, glad you like the title, and the stealing. LOL! And you're very welcome! 😊

Beautiful song :)

Name of the song:
The obvious one: I will hold your head at night.
My personal preference: Goat at the gate.

:)

hahah! goat at the gate. winner. or "I'm a Goat"