I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but you have to say the week number in your intro along with the words "Open Mic",e.g. "Steemit Open Mic 57" or "Steemit Open Mic Week 57", in order for it to be a valid entry. You might also consider getting at least enough of your face in the shot that we can see your lips as you say the words :)

Great playing though! I enjoyed this. I was not familiar with the tune, really love it. It almost has a Super Mario kind of video game music feel to it, which I actually mean as a complement. Following you - looking forward to more good tunes :) Cheers - Carl