🎵 Steemit Open Mic Songwriters Challenge Week 7 - “Right Place Right Time” (Original Song)steemCreated with Sketch.

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"Right Place Right Time" is an original song, prompted by this week's Steemit Open Mic Songwriters Challenge. You can be the first to hear it.

“Right Place Right Time”

The Story

The songwriting theme is "Right Place and/or Right Time," and that's exactly where and when I found myself this past week. It's been a wild journey! I had the rare opportunity to film and photograph a historic Native American ceremony celebrating the life of Mary Elizabeth Thunder. She made her passage on December 28, 2017, and yet she was still with us through the entirety of a 4-day wake.

On the night when I first arrived at Thunder Ranch, I participated in a "Devotional" ceremony, in the tradition of the Native American Church. Although this ceremony is usually held in a tipi, this one took place inside of a fortress, and I stood on a stairwell with my camera planted above two chiefs. Now, imagine capturing pictures of chiefs wearing sacred bird feathers, carrying ancient artifacts, working with peyote medicine, and immersing themselves in the spirit realm.

This dream come true lasted three days, and it continues to last. Late in the night following this first meeting, I slept under the stars, with the moon shining behind the clouds. Shivering cold, I bundled myself into a sleeping bags inside another sleeping bag, watching the clouds dancing in the moonlight, and then the rain came, misting mystically. Magical really, considering the weather report: 0% chance of rain that day. I'll say about that much.

I sketched this illustration on the fly, in the force of many medicines. It abstractly reveals a scene in the Sun Dance arena, decorated in buffalo skulls, with people gathering in a ring around the "Tree of Life"–a 70-foot cottonwood tree that I helped chop down and transplant here last Spring. Prayer flags and feathers were flying, along with Mary Elizabeth Thunder.


The Lyrics

Right place right time
The stars align
Right here right now
Some way somehow

In the sleeping meadow fire flickers awake
Dreams dashing away like a mustang
Hooves and heart lub-dubbing with booming
I hoot and howl like a wolf to the moon

Right place right time...

Fire flashes at my feet on the ground
Rising through the top of my crown
And the wind lifts my breath like a rattlesnake ghost
As a prayer goes up in smoke

Right place right time…

Some invisible force is moving me to tears
Eyes stinging as I face my fears
Throat burning I am all out of words
I sit and listen to the singing birds

Right place right time…


This sketch visualizes the scene I described above, with the moon obscured by clouds, and the sky crying.


The Acknowledgements

I'm grateful to @meno and @luzcypher for bringing us the #openmicsongwriters community challenge. I'll say once again that I am so grateful for the #openmic as a whole: the hosts, the audience, the songwriters... This event lights me up week after week. I am impressed and delighted to see the growth of these Open Mic events as well as many levels of growth I see in certain participants, including myself. Thank you to all of you.


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Sweet performance, man.

Gracias amigo!

wow. this is lovely. I love the final verse 'Some invisible force is moving me to tears...' xo

Thanks so much. This #openmic event sure is sweet, isn't it? I'm really happy to be in the creative spirit with you, admiring adoring your voice and your piano notes and all you share.

:-) :-) :-) yay xo yeah what a great challenge its been!

Love the depth of explanation and creativity, and the fingerpicking is real nice

Really enjoying this style of guitar playing, and I'm so happy to be making progress in this area.

this is gorgeous... lovin' the story behind it. and i especially love that first art piece you did... very synchronistic, too, for me to find this just now... at the right place, right time. sounds like a dream scenario too to be invited into that sacred wake... <3 resteemed.

"Dream" is just the right word for this "wake," yes! So happy you see it this way. Thank you for your reply here, and for your resteem. Love you!

Epic fingerpicking ! I especially love the melody :))

My @ocd friend, yay! Really grateful for your compliments here @macchiata. Thank you.

Thank you for the inspiration - it inspired me to posted the first ever video of me "singing" a song. It is also an original. What a beautiful piece you composed here. Thank you for sharing.

Good one, man! I found your song and left you a reply there, as I feel so happy seeing another rad daddy express his heart. I'm thinking we dads can join forces here on Steemit and make space for more #parenting posts.

perfect lines i love this poetry continue bro continue

I really appreciate you for seeing the poetry in here, and for encouraging me in this area. Thank you.

This was very beautiful! I love the song and the lyric. I feel that it has more meaning in it than what the most people can understand. Great work :)

So kind of you, thank you. In fact, the meaning is kind of mysterious to me. It's kind of abstract, like a thread of feelings, rather than concrete thoughts. I'm so grateful to you for noticing this, and for helping me to process it. Thanks again, my friend.

wow cabe, that was a really beautiful song. Clearly inspired by a very beautiful experience! The poetry is phenomenal here.....super evocative, I think this has to be one of my favourites in the competition so far. I really love it. The accompanying story and the artwork fill out a picture of a truly magical time that I feel honoured to have a glimpse of! Thankyou for sharing brother, this challenge just keeps feeding me gems.....it feels incredibly luxurious!

Jeeze, man, thank you. You've been such a good friend to me–an encouraging voice and an inspiring presence. I'm so glad to know you, and grow with you. Yes, and I agree with you that this #openmicsongwriters is unearthing so many gems in us #openmic participants. Thank you, thank you...

Absolutely stunning, what a beautiful story, and your original was so nice to listen to as I scrolled down the rest of your posts, I vote for more sketch book posts! Really enjoyed how it all came together in this post friend- THANK YOU! <3

Sister, you just keep on strumming my heartstrings. Thank you so much. Love you.

Make on maker! <3

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