OpenMic Songwriters Challenge Week 7. I do not know / Yo no sé.

in #openmic8 years ago (edited)

Today I bring you my first entry in the OpenMic Songwriters Challenge, with the central themes 'Right place / Right time'; I do not want to miss the opportunity to thank @luzcypher, @pfunk and the whole team behind this excellent project. This song is inspired by the almost anxious feeling that produces chasing eternal moments with the person we want, the shyness of the first meeting and the firm decision to dance to smile.

El día de hoy les traigo mi primera entrada en el concurso OpenMic Songwriters Challenge, con los temas centrales ‘Right place/Right time’; no quiero dejar pasar la oportunidad de agradecerle a @luzcypher, a @pfunk y a todo el equipo detrás de este excelente proyecto . Esta canción está inspirada en la sensación casi ansiosa que produce perseguir momentos eternos junto a la persona que deseamos, la timidez del primer encuentro y la decisión firme de bailar para sonreír.

English

I do not know, why are you running away?
If I find you, where are you going?
If you smile while running away
And you hug me and you elude me
I'm not going to let you go.

I do not know why you look at me differently from others.
You bite your lips, you get impatient,
Right place, exact time,
What will I expect?

I do not know! Why do not you come and dance at once.
Right place, exact time,
Take my hand: let yourself go.

Let's dance until the sky falls at our feet.
Let's run together, very deep,
Let's escape from this world,
To the place, where you can love.

I do not know, why do not you come and dance at once.
Right place, exact time,
Take my hand: let yourself go.

Spanish

Yo no sé, por qué escapas
si te encuentro ¿A dónde vas?
Si sonríes mientras huyes,
y me abrazas y me eludes:
No te voy a soltar.

Yo no sé, por qué me miras diferente a los demás.
Muerdes tus labios, te impacientas,
lugar correcto, tiempo exacto,
¿A qué voy a esperar?

¡Yo no sé! Por qué no vienes y bailamos de una vez.
Lugar correcto, tiempo exacto,
toma mi mano: déjate llevar.

Bailemos hasta que el cielo caiga a nuestros pies.
Corramos juntos, muy profundo,
escapemos de este mundo,
al lugar, donde te pueda amar.

Yo no sé, por qué no vienes y bailamos de una vez.
Lugar correcto, tiempo exacto,
toma mi mano: déjate llevar.

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You have a great voice man. Very powerful.

Thanks you man!

:)

Wow! Such a passionate voice and delivery, and I hear a lot of tasty hooks in the melody. I hope it's ok to ask: do you know anybody who plays guitar? I would love to hear your song with backing music! :)

Thank you for your comment; I love music and I feel a little sad for not being able to continue participating in the openmic, although I understand it.

I do not have many acquaintances who play guitar but, I would love to get someone to sing with guitar. If I get it, I'll upload it immediately. I will follow you too. Thank you!

Are you sure that the acapella rule applies to the Songwriters' Challenge? Might want to double check that, I thought it was only for the Open Mic...

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