Steemit Open Mic Week 65 - Peace and Control (Original)

in #openmic6 years ago

Hi steemers! or should i say steemiters?
Being a soldier got me writing a song, and this is the result.
hope you enjoy :)

Lyrics-
They gave their freedom one day
They suffered rain and cold and pain
They did complain but not in vain
Their weep was justice, so they claimed

We are your heros so they told
We came to save your preciuos souls
We pay we pay but not in gold
We pray we pray for

Peace and control
Love beyond all
Travel the world
Forever
Reaching our goals
Let them all know
Our home is where ever
Our mind is free to grow

They told their children you are free
You will not fight you aint like me
But in their heart there was a doubt
If this will ever, ever stop

Fire and bones
Lifting their tones
Loosing their sons
Forever
Reaching no goals
Dont let them go
Now home is down under
They lay there cold and calm

You cry for them asleep now
Dont ask the sky why and how
They scream just stop the fight
But they fade out and died

Peace love control
They cant have it all
Their savers are gone
Forever
Youre doomed preciuos souls
Now you make a call
Couse now they already
Gained their freedom

Peace and control...

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I liked your intro - then I liked your song even more! Great song, man... "As you are, Soldier"...

Thank you that means a lot to me :)

Welcome to Open Mic.

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really good song my friend thanks for performing for us. good stuff

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