OPEN MIC WEEK 45 - Original song, "Here I Stay" (Uke/Piano)

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

(SWINGS HYPNOTIZING AMULET)
Bell rings

You're on an island. You hear waves. Sand warms your feet.
You're at peace. Buuuut, it's a deserted island, you're about to die, and you'd rather be somewhere else.

lol.
Actually it's just a simple, dreamy little song about waiting for the bus. But, interpret it however you wish.

Lyrics:

Here I stay, wishing waiting.

Maybe this day would fade.

Take me away,

Far from this place.

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Gentlemen, this entry is brilliant beyond words! I mean, come on, the Keys in concert with Ukulele… Really? This entry defines sublime – BRAVO!

You are too kind sir. Thank you. (Bows)

Sir Thankyou

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We appreciate you starting something so awesome for all the musically inclined steemians out there! I've seen some awesome entries, you got people bringin the heat!!

Keep smiling, reading, writing and voting!!!
Thank post good

Great advice! Will do :) thanks

I like the vibe! Very chill.

Why thank you!

Lol nice. I need to make somethin like that. Followed :)

nice song, :) upvoted and resteemed

Nice! Are you gonna build this song out further? If not it's great as is. Very whimsical. :)

Definitely so! Thank you so much! sorry for the late reply. I'll link you when we do. Much love!

Nicely done guys.

Thanks <3

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