Steemit Open Mic Songwriters Challenge Week #4 - Oneness
Oneness
LYRICS
(verse 1)
Oh! we can live in competition
and, burden our backs.. burden our backs,
Or we can live in co-operation
Lifting each others sacks, ooo
Oneness is the way, the only way
Oh, it can lead us out of this..
Confusing mess
But, all is not lost, all is not lost
(pre-chorus)
Cause I will do, what i was born to do
Know that I ask, nothing of you
Just to love yourself and love all that is you
Live this life to your best, live a life that's true
(chorus)
Cause' we can, dance and sing, under a sky so blue
Cause' that is what, we were born to do
Come on and shine that heart...
Shine it bright...
Feel the love, enjoy your light.
(verse 2)
Now, schools mislead and religions misguide
Corrupting the children, destroying the tribes
All this for the exchange of a little money
Pisses off, the God in I
All is not lost, all is not lost...
(pre-chorus)
(chorus)
Ooooooo ....
Cause we can, dance and sing
under a sky so blue.
A very interesting theme for week #4 - Because we can. @luzcypher, @meno, @openmic
Decided to rope in a good friend to pull this one off and I do hope you enjoy the music.
The theme isn't the title of the song this time, however it does take the spotlight with the chorus... (cause' we can, dance and sing ...). Do let me know how you feel, and what I could work on for the weeks to come.
On a different note, I am back home after a month of being on the move and it sure feels good, working off a comfortable set-up.
Cheers and Love
Your harmonies are GORGEOUS. What kind of guitar are you playing?
Thank you @ausxen ... The guitar is a Greg Bennet which has aged about 18 years. :)
Never heard of the brand but it sounds good! Even through the recording quality.
Beautiful and uplifting, I can feel the sunshine and a Reggae feel seeping through, your voices are so sweet together.👍
Thank you very much @geenaizzy ... \:D
Beautiful song and you guys sound great together. Thanks for sharing your music with us.
Thank you @luzcypher ... appreciate the positivity .. :D
this is lovely! You both have really good voices and the song is so full of positivity and love, its impossible not to like! and when you both go in to the 'oo's at the end, that is just Super Nice! Im not a technical musician, but in my opinion, theres nothing that needs working on with this song, you just need a recording studio!!! :D
@basilmarples ... Thank you so much for listening. :D I shall take your word with the studio bit and shall let you know when we get there :D .
hehe, excellent ;)