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RE: The Beautiful Triumvirate - Chapter 9 (Original Novel by RiskDebonair)

in #novel7 years ago

Poem: The poem is nice, the author seems to want to hide behind their pain, a way they might find peace and retribution for mistakes made in the past. Lovely.


Beautiful Triumvirate:

There would be death today, but it would not be the death of Chief Kief.

Alas i saw this line and was immediately relieved, but as the story progressed I began to doubt it because Michael John, Gan and Whiskey had decided to choose their initial purpose of being in the town over saving chief kief. Although I kind of reasoned with the fact that innocent people could be caught in the crossfire should in case they decided to do something. This left me in total pain, the same way Gan was feeling also. Chief kief did not deserve to die. It was however interesting to see the banker, a man behind the shadows controlling the people and the economy of the town. If I was Gan, I would definitely shoot him first followed by the big mouthed little Blair. I was indeed shocked at the turnout of events as the least person I would have imagined, came out to save the day. Who would have thought blakheart had it in him all along Lolz.

If the courts can decide to kill then so can God!” the preacher shouted as he unsheathed a hidden sword from his cane.
With those words the preacher had declared himself God.

This was totally epic, i could imagine I was there as he was saying it, with all the cinematic music playing to accompany the next action Lolz. @riskdebonair you are awesome really... Waiting for the next, didn't think another episode would come early... @dee-y over and out.

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Thanks! It's worth posting just to see your analysis 😊

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