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RE: NOIA Network: Paving the way for Internet 2.0
Hello,It is a well written article indeed.Still,there are some long paragraphs which could be broken down to short and somehow the introduction of this blog seemed a bit lengthy to me too.
I have always believed that:
"Brevity is the soul of wit"
I am not saying this to mean that your writing isn't good.I am just offering my suggestion as you have wanted people to read your article.
Overall,this is an extraordinary writing.It is helpful,well-organized and rich in information.
My best wishes for you.