As you asked for a bit of input / advice, here it is ...

1 – Be consistent! In the heading, you spell BONGOBONDHU with 3 "o"s. Then in the text, you spell the same name with 3 "a"s. Find the correct spelling, and use that. Incorrect spelling is a sign of shoddy writing, and reflects badly on the writer.

2 – Write complete sentences. Your first 2 "sentences" are NOT complete sentences. The first sentence does not have a verb, and every sentence needs a verb. The second sentence is only a dependent clause, so there is no MAIN clause.

3 – What does "repranged" mean? I've never heard that word, so I googled it. That word does not appear in any dictionary, so I doubt that it's a word. Do you know what it means? You should ensure that you understand what you are writing.

3 – Separate your paragraphs with an open line. That makes it easier for your reader

4 – Keep your paragraphs short. Most readers will not want to read a long paragraph, but will gladly read a shorter paragraph. As for me, I try to keep all my paragraphs as short as 2–3 sentences.

5 – Use sub-headings. For every 2–3 paragraphs, you should insert a sub-heading, to introduce that part of the text. Sub-headings also make it easier for the reader to understand what he will read. Here's an example of my photo posts, with some clear headings which make it easier to read. https://steemit.com/architecturalphotography/@majes.tytyty/living-in-style-traditional-curved-roof-and-decorative-facade-northern-sumatra-architectural-photography

6 – For a longer post such as yours above, make sure you have a clear and attractive introduction.

Then, the body of the text should have clear paragraphs, with each paragraph expressing one idea or concept or fact.

The final paragraph should feature a good conclusion.

Hope this all helps! It will take you time to learn and to put into practice, but that's what a writer has to do.

Good luck!