My 1rst and own poetry . I make it own

in #new8 years ago (edited)

@dobartim chelleng me to make my own poetry then I try to make this cute poetry..
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  • You gave me the life when I want to die.
  • You give me the flower when people give me tear .
  • You give me your own when I have nothing .
  • You give me the love when peoples give me hate.
  • You give me the relation when iwas alone.
  • Now I dont want live with out you.
  • Now I dont want flower I only want you.
  • Now I don't want life I only want you .
  • Now I dont want peoples I only want you.

My own poetry @nomannomi

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wao great poetry brother

Thnks my friend

welcome

Great poetry dear

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