Esperando...
Hello world!
I made this song some years ago during Tomi Lebrero's songwriting workshop.
Today I was working on it and this is what happened...
Lyrics:
Esperando
Pasó una persona silbando un poema,
dos viejos amigos juntando cartón.
Pasaron dos hojas marrones de otoño
nadando en el río pegado al cordón.
Tres chicas muy chicas, ruidosas, risueñas,
en eso una moto y un auto bordó.
Pasaron dos perros paseando a sus dueñas,
de extra en la escena esperaba yo.
Y pasó un colectivo cargado de flores,
y pasó una morocha que no me miró
y pasaron dos cebras montadas por monos
tirando un carruaje, que en la esquina giró...
Great composition, overall a nice tune. Thank you for sharing.
thank you! and you're welcome...
Beautiful! Check out my post, one original song to https://steemit.com/music/@uriell/original-song-nossa-terra-our-earth-uriel-luano-and-faowna
Dont't stop composing
Grato, meu caro amigo
;)
That is so good. Look forward to hearing more from you.
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