It sounds good, but I get the feeling you wanted to showcase too much at a time.

My experience with progressive psytrance is that tracks last longer than "regular" songs played on the radio, typically 8 to 10 minutes and that they build up slowly (5, 6 minutes).

In Gold Line I hear a lot of different themes in the 6:48 the song lasts.

But that's just my 2 ¢.

It's clear you put a lot of time and effort into it, and that you have a lot of musical talent. I'm looking forward to your next tracks!