Pebbles in the Sand (original song - rough draft acoustic)

in #music8 years ago (edited)


Hey, it's my first DTube video. This is a rough draft of a song from about 4 years ago before my hand got messed up and I couldn't play.

You won't see much here except my guitar in the dark with christmas lights reflected into it. So if you're a straight up visual person you won't like it, but if you can stand to just watch a guitar in the dark with Christmas lights on it and my voice singing, maybe it will be okay.

I recorded it onto video quickly so I wouldn't forget how it goes later. I may change some things, but for now this is how it goes. It occurs to me that I changed the lyrics since recording this, so some don't match up. My more final draft is what I've typed out below.

I had a cold and it is was hard to hit any kind of resemblance of a high note, which I'd prefer to be doing on the words "moon" and "Tide." When I record it for real, hopefully it will sound much better..

I hope to actually finally record it soon for a new album I'm working on, which probably will take a few years to finish, knowing me. I'll upload a video that actually shows my face next.

"Pebbles in the Sand"

tiny little pebbles in the sand
I lifted them up into my hand
and tossed them far away into the sea
gone now forever, let them be

CHORUS

The tide, it rolls away now
but I know it will find me once again
and I..... now watch the moon set
here with my back against the sand

I saw a bird and he saw me
I hope that he remembers me
he flew from a tree down to my hand
and then he flew away beyond the sand

{Repeat Chorus)


© serena matthews


Here's the facebook video if you can't get the DTube video to play. I know some people have that problem.

https://www.facebook.com/serenamatthewsmusic/videos/10151915233918100/


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Inspirational! The most common way people give up their power is by thinking they don't have any. We steemians must stand together!

I love listening to you sing...

Will sing for ya anytime, mister.

I just melted and slowly disappeared into the sofa! Absolutely beautiful voice! You're an absolute Angel Serena!
Darren xx

Another gorgeous song, Serena!
I love your voice! It’s awesome that you’re working on an album! Yay!

Thanks, Nathan! ♥ Been writing for awhile, can finally work on music!

This is incredibly relaxing and is a song I will be going back and listening to again for sure. I will certainly buy your album when it comes out! You’re awesome @paintingangels!

Even with a cold, you're still pretty awesome!
I had to grab my guitar and attempt to strum along as best I could...

I really like this song, it has so much potential.
You really have great artistic ability.
well done again

Your voice is so pretty and I love your guitar playing!! I absolutely love it!!!

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