The Rap Battle ft. Daniel

in #music7 years ago (edited)

Back at it again! Thought I'd share a school project me and a friend of mine put toghether.
We got similar voices so its kind of hard to tell us apart but I thought I'd put down the lyrics for yall so its easier to hear what's being said and to know which one is who.

The song is called The Rap Battle and its basically about me being afraid of being a total fluke in the music business, and how i need to stay out of my own head and just roll with it.
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I wrote all the lyrics on this track and i would really appcreciate some real feedback on it. I don't really have a clue what people in general think of my writing concidering everyone who's seen my lyrics are friends of mine and they might be biased. So i hope somebody makes the time to hit me with something real!

Lyrics down below!

(D) okay my man
(K) yeah?
(D)now this is your moment to shine
(K)okay
(D)hope you are ready for this
(K) i guess
(D)remember you cannot decline
(K)what??
(D)concidiring i already paid for it
(K)but coach i dont wanna do this, i dont think that im made for this

(D)what? you kidding right? you really dont have a choice
we're already here so stop acting like a little boy
now go up on that stage and make som fuckin noise
you strapped right?

(K)"Huh?"

(D) you know, i mean like, your voice?

(K)i guess, but im just feeling a little anxious
after all you know english is my second language
if i had a third one i guess it would be spanish
the reason for that is the series known as Narcos,it is the baddest
Plata O Plomo?
impressed huh? well that's all that i know tho
oh wait i got one more, and i think its gonna get loco
to mess with pablo and his coco is a no-go
i strongly dissadvise it unless you wanna get eaten by lobos

(D)that was okay, but what happened to the word compadre
you should follow with wannabe pablo, puta de madre
step up your game or you'll be the one who got played
so fast its not even realistic, just like the arcades

(chorus)

(K)i feel the walls are closing in
im stressed out now, dont know where to begin
i don't think i can do this, i fear the result
im acting like a child, even tho i am an adult
whyyyyy, yes i said whyyyy is this so haaard
whyyyyy, yes i said whyyyy is this so damn haaard

(D)fool what are you going on about
you shouldn've never stepped inside if you wanted out
yeah you on it now
so try to make this shit count
you are hanging on by a thread so make sure you aint falling down
and be careful with who the fuck you're calling out
that's how you ended up here in this moment now
but you got bars homie, yeah you're balling now
you can do this, you just gotta keep on growing now

(K)you're right!
just forget it
after all i didn't come all this way just to later regret it
neither did i come with the need to be accepted
you can think what you want but you still gotta respect it
in fact that shit is absolutely critical
only way i'd be satisfied on the top of the pinnacle
cuz my flow is formidable
and if you cant acknowledge that i guess you gotta be an imbecile
a dumb fuck, described with three syllables
ignorance and jealousy is the most typical
attributes of such a person
thats why im learning not to be nervous and rather be nerveless
ive been rehearsing several different versions ready to serve
out to whoever wanna listen
and i swear to god as my witness
you do not wanna miss this
as i conquer this business
head on
headstrong
headbutting my way through the motherfucking bedrock
now im in hell? im like Hell nah!
"someone help me" the devil screamed as choke him out with a headlock

(D)"wow? you had him locked in your headlock?"

(K)yeah then i punched him and guess what? headshot!
now you should ask yourself "then what?"
Im knee-deep in debt, after paying for his dentals

(Chorus)

i don't know what's gotten in to me
but now im fine and im synched to the beat
im used to feeling troubled, but now im feeling good
i'll try to act more like a freestyler should
i can go all out all night loong
i am gonna prove everybody wrong

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