Original Song - Distance

in #music8 years ago (edited)


Here I was, getting ready to close from my day at school. All my students were gone and the days lectures were over, but this tune kept ringing in my head and the lines flowed soon as I sat on my piano.

To everyone out there, be reminded of the fact that there is someone who loves you beyond your flaws and is ready to accept you whenever you decide to give him/her a chance.

IF SUCH PERSON DOESN'T EXIST IN YOUR LIFE, YOU CAN BE THAT PERSON TO ANOTHER

intro (instrumentals)

I'll be here standing here beside you
Wondering where you've gone

Hand's interlocked and were dancing
Still you're far away

I can feel you chest beside mine
Yet there's no heartbeat

It's all about how
You take your steps when
It's up to you to choose your own path
I'll be your guide
should you choose to stray home
I'm here to pick up whatever is left

outro (instrumentals)

I'll love to know what you think of this song guys, share your patient-love story with me by leaving a comment here.
If you would like me to write a song for you, just let me know here and tell me what you would like me to theme it around..lol

music is my life and I am ready to help you get through yours in every way I can.

much love

@klynic


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Sounds great. You've got a beautiful voice. :)

Thank you so very much

I loved it, brother. It has John Legend type of style to it. Loved the melody and the words. And, you have a pretty good voice. You are talented my friend. Keep singing from your heart and you can't go wrong. :)

Thank you for sharing this song with us today. Have an amazing day. :)

i am glad you found the soul hidden in the lyrics, thank you so much

It's everywhere, from the teacher with an annoying student, to the single mother in the restaurant washing dishes, to the labourer labouring for his family at home! Patient love is everywhere, in our homes and in our communities!

I for one find my patient love in the church where there's a community looking after me and patiently nurturing me! :)

Beautiful song with a beautiful meaning! Good job my friend!

wow, you literally told the entire story of the song, I am honoured that you gave it a listen.

Ain't it Great?
I had a Patient, loving father.

I reflect back on just HOW patient he was, & it amazes me !

He never honked a horn in Traffic, & never yelled.


WHAT a GUY ! Hope you have a Wonderful YEAR ☻

yes I have had a wonderful year so far... Your father must have been so awesome. I am glad and sure you turned out just fine.

thank you for listening

Yes, he certainly was (I plan to do something in his honor ).

Have followed u, so can listen more.

Pure talent bro. Nice one👍

Thank you sir

Took the time to go & listen - and hey, I really liked this. The angle u shot the #VIDEO at was cool, as I could SEE your hands manipulate the Keyboard (Good call ! ).

At one point, you even used a knuckle on 1 of the keys .. I enjoy seeing the specific nature of yr Playing, because I once played the organ. You have those nice, LONG fingers (u Lucky duck) -- so u can handle Many keys at once.

Makes 4 a nice flow, & sound !

My Fingers are short (so am a bit jealous) - and admiring your play today, here on #STEEMIT .

Will Share . ♥

lol, quite funny that you call me a duck. You know before I left my school that day, I took over 4 shots of this same song and had to delete 3 of them except this one. Glad it struck you real good.

you duck lover ... hehe

join me on my radio channel tomorrow .. It will be a fun way to call me a duck to my ears.. haha
use this link to get there on discord
https://discord.gg/s3SrZZA

Dope man. You actually managed to get my daughters attention away from Peppa Pig to watch this video. Major accomplishment :D..

really? now I need to send her flowers .... how old is she ?

Haha.. no need, but I like the gesture. She's 3.

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