"We Can Make it Through STEEMIT": My song composition

in #music7 years ago (edited)

This is the lyrics of my song composition about steemit and how I share steemit to others. I will make a video or a record track of it sooner or later so you can hear how it's sound. But for now I will just share the lyrics hopefully you can also help me improve the lines thanks.

Title "We Can Make it Through STEEMIT"
composer @dclass6 (Rj Sapin)

Verse I
The new day is coming
Join us now tomorrow will be better
You want to share your stories
You want to share what's on your mind

Pre-chorus
There's new and better way you can make it

CHORUS:
You can make it through steemit Oh oh
We can make it through steemit
Together we will rise and our a new day will shine
Let us help each other and reach our dreams
With steemit

Verse II
Here we are rewarded with a token friends and fun
Sign up now and tomorrow will be better
You want to be an inspiration and a leader
You want meet people with vision and aspiration

Pre-chorus
There's new and better way we can make it!

CHORUS:
You can make it through steemit Oh oh
we can make it through steemit
Together we will rise and our a new day will shine
Let us help each other and reach our dreams
With steemit

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You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:

Join us now tommorow will be better.
It should be tomorrow instead of tommorow.

I am really this is nice post

Nice song!

Thanks :) for the appreciation :)

Hello there @dclass6! you will be featured in our Daily Steem Dump's "Feature Post." As part of the being chosen you are given the opportunity to recommend to us Steemit Post that you think is worthy to be included in our daily "Featured post." We hope to hear from you soon.

How can I recommend a post thanks for featuring me :)

You can just reply the link and the reason why you are recommending the steem blog-post.

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