My Doubts Resolved (Revised for Live Performance)

Hello everyone, a few months ago I posted this original composition. I have recently been asked to perform a prelude at two church services, so I've decided to upload the revised music and dynamics, to show my progress in preparation for these performances. Thank you to my piano teacher for helping me to revise the music, here is the revised version. 

Here is my last performance of it at my 8th grade talent show (starts at 2:44): 

I was really disappointed that the Sherlock Holmes article did not do as well as I had hoped, I put a lot of effort into it, so it would mean a lot to me if you would go check it out.

Thanks for reading this! Let me know what improvements you think I should make in the next two weeks, and please let me know what you think. See you next time!

Also remember to check for: My weekly 7 post, [Something else will eventually go into this space]!