Annabel Lee (Original Composition) (Revised)

A few weeks ago, I posted my musical setting of Edgar Allan Poe's Annabel Lee. There were many rhythms that did not work, and it did not have dynamics (considering that I had written it two days before). With that considered, I am uploading a revised version:

Big Changes
-Tried to put more emphasis on words such as love in the first minor section (But we LOVED with a LOVE that was MORE than LOVE). This is stressing the stressed syllables.

-Changed the rhythm on (But our love it was stronger by far than the love of those who were older than we). This results in an easier to sing rhythm.

-Made some slight changes to the piano part.

-Added dynamics.

-Spelled Allan in Edgar Allan Poe correctly (last time I spelled it Allen).

-Changed a lot of syllables to be stressed properly.

-Added a fermata at the end.

-Changed notation (8th note stemming) to 3/8 + 3/8 + 2/8 rather than 4/4.
Here is the version with both voice and piano:

Here it is with just the piano part (sorry there is no ritardando at the end. I accidentally deleted it when I exported this recording);

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