Half Hour Songwrite Challenge + sleepover madness = Episode 6 - CANDY - 12/7/18 - A Dtube Exclusive!
It's the 6th episode of HALF HOUR SONGWRITE CHALLENGE! 💛
Many thanks to @tibfox, who contributed the prompt for today's song: CANDY
I couldn't stop thinking about the prompt, so ended up writing most of the lyrics and melody during the day today, in my head, at work, while sanding and staining windows. So this isn't strictly a half hour songwrite. Nevertheless it feels pretty skin-of-the-teeth, so I think it fits.
This ended up being a really fun prompt to work with! Candy is a ubiquitous theme in pop songs, and I couldn't seem to get away from the usual slant when trying to think of what to write, so rather than fight it I decided to try to make it my own.
Also, my son and two of his friends are having a sleepover tonight, and they did a bit of heckling while I was working on this installment, just to make things extra interesting 😜
Although CANDY is pretty close to a finished song, the other songs I've written and posted so far this week are not. On Sunday I'll be finishing one song from this week's Half Hour Songwrite Challenge, and posting the completed version. But on SATURDAY you, the viewers, get to decide which one! Saturday's video will feature numbered clips of each of the song fragments composed this week, and you get to vote for the one you'd most like to see made into a finished song. So be sure to tune in on Saturday and vote!
If you have a prompt that you'd like to see me try, drop it in the comments below. If I use your prompt I will send you one SBI as a thank you!
HALF HOUR SONGWRITE CHALLENGE is an ongoing daily Dtube vlog. Each day I challenge myself to write a song in 30 minutes, using a one word prompt provided by a random word generator (https://wordcounter.net/random-word-generator), by viewer suggestion, or by @mariannewest's daily freewrite on the Steem blockchain.
Today's viewer suggested word is CANDY
Lyrics to today's song:
CANDY
She looks delicious
But is she nutritious
Or just another sugar rush?
She looks so sweet good enough to eat
But too much could be dangerous
'Cause if you get too high and you crash too fast
Then you end up shaking
Craving one fix after another it's
Hard to get a good look
Once you're hooked
So think before you kiss her
Have you analyzed the risk here?
No
Oh just let her put you in a coma
You know you know you want her
Go!
Candy
Candy
She melts in your mouth
Do not exceed the recommended daily amount
She makes your heart beat way too fast
Which is exactly the right speed
Oh Candy you're all
I need
Sweet innocence of youth
You bite off more than you can chew
But once you start you don't want to stop
So brace yourself boy
She's not a toy
Even when you've got her spinning like a top
'Cause when you fly too high you never want to come down
Then it's fix to fix one thing leads to another
Pretty soon you're hitching rides
On dragonflies
Across the universe
Did you stop to think first?
No
'Cause she's so sweet you want to scream
You're a kid
It's Halloween
And she's
Candy
Candy
She melts in your mouth
Do not exceed the recommended daily amount
She makes your heart beat fast fast fast
And that's exactly the right speed
Oh Candy you're all
I need
This is your brain on
Candy
Candy
She melts in your mouth
Do not exceed the recommended daily amount
She makes your heart beat way too fast
Which is exactly the right speed
Oh Candy you're all
I need
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Special thanks to @mariannewest and @freewritehouse for getting me hooked on freewrites in the first place ;)
You have a beautiful voice too, and much talent 👏 👏 👏
Thanks @jesuslnrs! Half Hour Songwrite is an ongoing series in which I write as much of a song as I can in 1/2 an hour. The entries for this week will be voted on by viewers and the winner made into a full song. Check out today's post if you'd like to help pick this week's song, which will be fleshed out and posted tomorrow. Would love to have you weigh in!
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Ahh the lyrics in your voice is really sweet😊😊
Thanks @freecrypto! Check out today's post if you'd like to help pick this week's song, which will be fleshed out and posted tomorrow. Would love to have you weigh in!
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So, you don't only write well, you sing well too, @bennettitalia :)
Super great job.
Thank you @iamjadeline! 💛
Ohhh man this was sooo cool and I didn't thought about that aspect of the word "candy" ^^
my intention was totally different but I love the result even more!
Thank you for writing and singing this! You have such a cool voice and guitar playing and writing style.
I love the song!
I am excited for the next round!
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! It was a fun prompt. I'd love to know what you had in mind for candy, it's so interesting to hear different takes on a prompt.
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