I've been messing with some words for this song since the first time I heard it and downloaded it. You wanna know what's wrong with this song? It ends abruptly like it was cut off. You can fix that, I know you can do it! :-)
Another thing that has been throwing me on this song is that I haven't yet figured out how far into the song the bass pattern changes, that has been catching me off guard. I probably just need to listen to it more often until I get it figured out in my head so that I can hear it coming, if you know what I mean.
Also, I put the song into Audacity and made it longer by copying a part of it and splicing it in, that was an interesting challenge, but I can't tell where it was spliced by listening to it, so I must have done pretty well with that. :-)