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RE: The Mundane as Art Round 5, theme STONES: "Stone Growing, Stone Swimming"
I liked what you did with this poem. Though it is unmistakably poetic, it also has a matter-of-fact type quality that incentivises the reader to take a deeper look into the piece. Nice work.
Well said and you definitely caught the matter-of-factish approach to its writing. I still remember as if it were yesterday when I came across this stone: Tree of life, life growths and the streams seemingly going countercurrent... Much gratitude for your kind words, they are really appreciated, namaste :)