Welcome to steem it!! I followed from my blog where you commented.
I have some advice: copy this introduction post and paste it into another "Submit a story" and use the "introduction post" as one of the tags. You will get a much bigger response from the community. Steem it loves to welcome newcomers!
Thank you so much pal, that's brilliant advice. I've just been reading about the importance of the tags and that sounds like a great shout!