@Tiandao, I know you really try hard and some times things get miss-interpreted. The main thing is to keep true to your life path and take each step with purpose. There will be many obstacles, there will be times of taking a step back on your path. Just make sure you take two steps forward because then that is progress.

Writing is also very difficult. Usually the readers on Steemit need less words and more simple statements. You will eventually learn what works best. Don't give up, keep inspiring yourself and one day you will reach your golden star! You have good intentions. Be true to yourself! .......Cabbagepatch-