Although changing everything to make it sound good in English is a bit complicated for me.

I completely understand, and I want to clarify that I'm not suggesting my way of narration is better than yours—not in the slightest. I'm merely sharing what I think I would have done. You are such an excellent writer yourself.

That is why I have not posted again in your wonderful Dream Community.

That's truly a shame, but I do understand. Sending much love and a big hug.