Dear @ifatniza

I was able to count between 70 and 80 words in your language, that's fine. But remember that National Geographic Magazine publishes in English, and the count of your story is: 123 words in English.

Please go back and edit your story until it reaches the 100 words in English that the magazine requested.

Sorry for the inconvenience caused.

PS.
The twist you gave to the story is very good, empowering and humorous, I like Timun Mas's character more and more each time.