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RE: Escribo desde diferentes perspectivas.
Warm greetings to you Mrs. @leight,
First of all, I would like to appreciate your image creations, which I consider to be the fruit of a broad and meaningful mind.
In the first story, you depicted an ant in a state of great confusion, a situation of perfect chaos, at the end of which the ant seemed to want to give up on the situation. If only the ant had fought harder, the character would have seemed stronger.
For the second story, you encourage your ant friend with the backstory that you've been in a similar situation, and explain that the way to get back up is to make changes. And I'm sure your ant friend will feel more hopeful for a better future.
In the third story, there is a feeling and hope to continue all the goodness.
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Excellent comment.
But are you sure there is nothing you could suggest to improve his way of telling stories from different perspectives?